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Moon Rising

Ocean rising--such silent splendor-- she stains a golden passage on the waves; blushing not, though borrowed brilliance is the only light she ever gave. Lesser celestial lamps, bright retinue, honor her regal queenly estate; yielding obeisance to her power, seasons and tides bow at her gates. Royally she rides the Milky Way, stardust blithely trailing in her train; lonely earth lovers, looking upward, stabbed in their souls with longing pain. Copyright, August 12, 2014

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Date: 9/3/2014 5:21:00 PM
This is awesome, I love your imagery, your vocabulary blends nicely into the texture of your poem, (so I had to break out my dictionary, for retinue, obeisance, and blithely and I am not embaressed to say so) your poem was brilliant, grats on your first place :)
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Date: 9/2/2014 4:52:00 PM
Hi Faye -- I love your poem. So much imagery and so nicely written. Congratulations! Sandra
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Date: 8/31/2014 10:33:00 PM
how profound and deeply moving, faye.. love the mood!.. bestest congrats!
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Date: 8/30/2014 11:35:00 PM
Exquisitely beautiful is ur write Faye! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/30/2014 8:13:00 PM
Seeing your brilliant personification poem again, Faye. congratulations to you. Soupmail.
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Date: 8/30/2014 7:39:00 PM
a moon beauty, no comparison, royal, I take a bow before thee. Congrats, Faye. Mohan
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:49:00 PM
Prodigious winner..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:21:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Very well done! Light & Love
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Date: 8/30/2014 3:05:00 PM
Faye, you have really captured the longing and romance of the Queen of Heaven here. I am happy you won ! Well-deserved !
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Date: 8/30/2014 1:36:00 PM
simply stunning many congratulations Faye:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/30/2014 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations Faye. It's amazing how the moon can hold us in her power and hypnotize us with her beauty as you just did me.
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:47:00 PM
congrats on making the winners list in my contest Faye
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Date: 8/13/2014 3:18:00 PM
My, this is wonderful. Lilting and lovely.
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