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Moon Rays

It promised to be a bright starry night as the sun dipped over the horizon. Poignantly poised the few clouds scatter as majestically the moon makes her appearance. So close as she starts her nightly sweep her rays near bright as day, regally she dominates the dark sending it to oblivion as she highlights this and that according to her whim. Fickly she slips behind some clouds and plunges the lands into inky darkness. Laughing with glee she travels to her zenith hovering there perfectly framed in beauty. Now past her apex time rushes on as she dips down her stellar light slowly begins to fade away. With a final flick she bathes the world in silver then bows to the dawning sun as she slips away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/6/2015 8:06:00 AM
Fantastic and magical yet true every word.
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Date: 1/4/2015 11:01:00 AM
A most elegant and charming write, Shadow. :) john.
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Date: 1/4/2015 2:19:00 PM
ty John appreciated hugs
Date: 1/4/2015 8:42:00 AM
The beauty of these are hard to describe but you did it ....:-) :-) great job...
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Date: 1/4/2015 2:17:00 PM
ty Donna lovely to see you hugs
Date: 1/4/2015 2:11:00 AM
linda a beautiful rays running through your pen
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Date: 1/4/2015 2:16:00 PM
ty Liam old mate hugs
Date: 1/3/2015 12:11:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this ...so very beautiful! HUGS, Deb
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Date: 1/3/2015 12:54:00 AM
ty Deb so nice to see you wishing you a great year hugs
Date: 1/2/2015 7:54:00 PM
wow, I hope you can think to personify one of the four seasons as well as you did the lovely moon with this poem, shadow (for that contest I just noticed on personification). I love personification and enjoyed how you made your last contest use it. good to see you in the new year!!
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Date: 1/3/2015 12:53:00 AM
lol can not enter it Andrea it is my contest ty hugs
Date: 1/2/2015 3:49:00 PM
#7 for a most beautiful poem bathing in lovely imagery. Well done, Shadow! // paul
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Date: 1/3/2015 12:52:00 AM
ty Paul pleased you like it hugs
Date: 1/2/2015 2:31:00 PM
wonderful imagery Shadow its a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 1/3/2015 12:51:00 AM
ty so much Jan hugs

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