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Moon Ode

Moon you serenade me nightly casting your beaming silvery rays touching and filling my weary soul with awesome magical perfection Watching you in your various phases crescent sliver you delight and enchant yet too your half sends heartfelt shivers as you wax your way to full glowing light moon dear moon you rule my senses as you wane, the sea's tides join you making my moods shift with your cycles your whims commanding earth herself I serenade and worship your beauty disliking intensely nights you are cloaked when clouds hid you from earthly sight then with a peek you emerge triumphant And now once more my heart rejoices written 05/08/2014 contest A poem you have not entered in a contest *1

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Date: 5/19/2014 10:09:00 AM
I wish I had have written this. I agree with Mr. Merrill's comment indeed. I felicitate (congratulate) you on this Win. The excellently conveyed Imagism within this marvelous Poem makes me feel closer to the Moon.
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Date: 5/17/2014 5:05:00 AM
Awesome write, loved this. Congratulations on the win, Shadow
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Date: 5/16/2014 10:03:00 PM
So glad this one did well in her contest. It is one of my favorites I have seen so far on the list! Congratulations.
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Date: 5/16/2014 12:12:00 AM
SHADOW, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest... Always~ Linda
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Date: 5/9/2014 3:35:00 PM
a beautiful moon scene unfolding at its best, shadow.. truly delightful!.. huggs
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Date: 5/9/2014 12:44:00 PM
- Shadow, I see your moon so bright and slightly mysterious - beautiful ode to the moon - Strange to think about ... but we all have the same moon :) - I wish you a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/9/2014 9:01:00 AM
You have captured the mystical quality of the moon. It indeed pulls on the ocean and our hearts.
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Date: 5/9/2014 12:23:00 AM
Hi Shadow. Luv this. I'm a big moon guy, and find the night to be terribly romantic, as you'll discover in my writes over time. I enjoyed this very much, and I appreciate the marvelous imagery and flow. Kudos, my friend. xxx Mel
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Date: 5/8/2014 10:03:00 PM
A good creation.
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Date: 5/8/2014 8:59:00 PM
a wonderful ode to the moon. WeLL DONE!! Was it for a contest??
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