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Moon Lit Lady

SF I see you when I close my eyes, my moon lit lady Cotton dress Tan lines Hot temper I see you when I close my eyes Infectious laughter Blushing I see you in my dreams, my moon lit lady Standing on a beach Toes curled in the sand A small boat run aground to the left Shoes kicked off to the right I see you in my dreams Windswept hair Shoeing a horse I see you in my hallucinations, my moon lit lady Black wings stretched wide Hands full of honey Hovering over a pool of liquid melody I see you in my hallucinations Roses singing Tears of silver I see you in my nightmares, my moon lit lady Skin boiling Callused claws Heart on the sleeve I see you in my nightmares White dress Thoughts of forever Epitaph, my ebook: http://www.amazon.com/Epitaph-ebook/dp/B00CCFQ9XS/ref=pd_rhf_gw_p_t_2_TBDR

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Date: 7/21/2013 3:14:00 AM
hi Kyle I am blown away (7) congrats on win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/20/2013 9:43:00 PM
This has a great combination of nostalgia with a haunting vision at the end : Very moving. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 7/20/2013 4:29:00 PM
Kyle - This is an OUTSTANDING write...Love the repeating 'I see you' lines introducing each verse, adding powerful punch to an already terrific poem...Congratulations sir - Tim
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Date: 7/20/2013 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Kyle xx
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Date: 7/19/2013 9:00:00 PM
Kyle, . CONGRATS <3 SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2013 9:00:00 PM
this is a good poem. CONGRATS <3 SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2013 8:19:00 PM
Hi Kyle, ... CONGRATULATIONS.... :-) :-) :-) LINDA
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Date: 7/16/2013 10:03:00 PM
Really powerful write. well done. Russell
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Date: 7/15/2013 7:47:00 PM
an awesome win. always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 7/15/2013 6:01:00 PM
Hi Kyle, this is my kind of poem, congratulations with your #1 win.......... SKAT
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Date: 7/15/2013 6:01:00 PM
ha ha, I see pd and I have the same taste :-)
Date: 6/25/2013 12:02:00 PM
Awesome! Congratulations on your win...
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Date: 6/20/2013 4:02:00 PM
Kyle congratulations on your excellent win. I look forward in reading more of your poems. Welcome to PS. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/20/2013 1:53:00 PM
Kyle ;-) Congratulations!!! Thank you for entering one of my latest contest. please enjoy all the other winners who took their time in entering the same contest you did. you can find the list on the -Contest Winners: Member area- or you can visit my newest blog called ""from HEART to HEART ..."" stop by if you like. always & forever *LINDA
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Date: 6/7/2013 3:13:00 PM
this has lots of cool imagery. Great poem!!
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