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Moon Light Shimmering Upon

Stream flows from mountain Moon light shimmering upon reflecting from slope

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2012 8:40:00 PM

I'm glad you corrected the word RObert told you about. It's very pretty this picture.

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/5/2012 11:55:00 PM

Nice write, but do you mean "slope" instead of "slop"? The word "slope" is the incline of the mountain while "slop" is like garbage or what some farmers feed pigs.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/6/2012 4:39:00 AM

Hi! Friend, sorry, it's a spelling mistake. Thanks for reminding. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/5/2012 10:42:00 PM

BL, xox~ I'm scared of mountains... however, this slop run down the mountain giving it beautiful edges with the moons delight... love your haiku...pd

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/6/2012 1:14:00 PM

A lot of thanks for reading my write and for your inspiration. Loved always, bl