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Crescent

The lonely night holds new remorse like songs of old we've heard before And though the sky may know the chords tonight's moon seems to stray off course In dark tonight all eyes are blind The crescent moon, so small upturned hears strains of sadness so aligned where even stars weep sad nocturnes Please moon, become the whole you are I need your lamp to see me through Although I see one million stars this night is lonely without you So dim the light that fills the eye the falling stars have left the sky
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ For Brian Strand's Contest: 231 ___________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/15/2013 8:11:00 AM
Carry this is a beautiful moon poem. Congratulations on your well deserved superb win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/15/2013 3:13:00 AM
Wow Carrie...Those first two lines just knocked me dead...'so slight your smile'...you have such a unique gift of describing things like no one else I have read...Congratulations my friend - Tim
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Date: 7/14/2013 10:21:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your win. stopping by to say good night. LOVE *LINDA
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Date: 7/14/2013 10:01:00 PM
congratulations WITH YOUR LOVELY WIN CARRIE, ;-) Enjoy my latest blog if you like. Always loving and enjoying the soup ~ skat ~
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Date: 4/7/2013 9:44:00 PM
A beautifully written tribute to a Muse, as fine as I have seeM
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Date: 3/23/2013 7:48:00 PM
Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/21/2013 12:50:00 PM
Congrats on your creative win..Sara
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Date: 3/20/2013 5:27:00 PM
Congrats Carrie. :-)
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Date: 3/18/2013 5:57:00 PM
I like this one very much. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/18/2013 5:05:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations with your musing moon poem :-) hope your having a sweet day... always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2013 10:13:00 AM
Just like the moon, you're the brightest of them all! Congratulations on your top placing in Russell's contest. RAY
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Date: 3/14/2013 4:05:00 AM
Fantastic sonnet! First four lines are awesome and I like the final couplet. Cheers!
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Date: 3/5/2013 8:26:00 AM
This is wonderful, Carrie! The first four lines are pure gold!
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