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Moon Is My Muse

(Moon is My Muse) Moon Musing You lie beyond an obscure veil Above the foggy city lights Illuminating the night so pale Giving darkness lights respite Elliptical loops around earth’s face Wearing wane or increase smiles Still quickening lover’s heart pace Ever working your earthly wiles Finding muses in your boldness Poets stroke their papered words Romance beckons in your fullness Love lyrics written or poetic blurbs Earthly harvesters glean in the night Twice find beauty in blue moon bright Written for: “Moon is My Muse” on 2/27/13 I used the definition for Sonnet found in Poetry Soup Forms

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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/22/2013 2:57:00 AM

I must say dis is a fabulous rhymin muse n d title attractd me as im a lunar lover. I rate it higly.

Bonchance Longfall

Date: 3/27/2013 6:52:00 PM

Love, love, love it!. What a wonderful tempo this work has. I always keep tweaking my works sometimes trying to tighten them for the sake of that wonderful tempo you maintain in this work. Sometimes, just an idea, less is more. I think tightening it for tempo even more by dropping an extra word here or there. Well written! love it.

Donna Jones

Date: 3/20/2013 5:34:00 PM

Congratulations on a great win Debra

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/18/2013 6:18:00 PM

Congratulations, Debra. The definition for sonnet is not very complete in Poetry Soup. . If you are interested you can find more by using your search engine and just typing sonnet. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2013 5:06:00 PM

Debra, congratulations with your musing moon poem :-) hope your having a sweet day... always~ LINDA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/18/2013 12:10:00 PM

((())) Congrats on your great win..Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/18/2013 10:05:00 AM

Debra I loved this poem. Nicely done and a congratulations is in order on your wonderful win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2013 10:35:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your very creative work..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for your visit to my work...I was honored to have you there..Sara