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Moon is My Muse

(Moon is My Muse)
Moon Musing

You lie beyond an obscure veil
Above the foggy city lights
Illuminating the night so pale
Giving darkness lights respite 

Elliptical loops around earth’s face
Wearing wane or increase smiles
Still quickening lover’s heart pace
Ever working your earthly wiles

Finding muses in your boldness
Poets stroke their papered words
Romance beckons in your fullness
Love lyrics written or poetic blurbs

Earthly harvesters glean in the night
Twice find beauty in blue moon bright

Written for: “Moon is My Muse” on 2/27/13
I used the definition for Sonnet found in Poetry Soup Forms

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  1. Date: 5/22/2013 2:57:00 AM
    I must say dis is a fabulous rhymin muse n d title attractd me as im a lunar lover. I rate it higly.

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 6:52:00 PM
    Love, love, love it!. What a wonderful tempo this work has. I always keep tweaking my works sometimes trying to tighten them for the sake of that wonderful tempo you maintain in this work. Sometimes, just an idea, less is more. I think tightening it for tempo even more by dropping an extra word here or there. Well written! love it.

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 5:34:00 PM
    Congratulations on a great win Debra

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 6:18:00 PM
    Congratulations, Debra. The definition for sonnet is not very complete in Poetry Soup. . If you are interested you can find more by using your search engine and just typing sonnet. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 5:06:00 PM
    Debra, congratulations with your musing moon poem :-) hope your having a sweet day... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 12:10:00 PM
    ((())) Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 10:05:00 AM
    Debra I loved this poem. Nicely done and a congratulations is in order on your wonderful win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:35:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your very creative work..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for your visit to my work...I was honored to have you there..Sara

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:49:00 PM
    Lovely sonnet Deb, the moon is such a wonderful subject for poetry and you did the lady justice! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:15:00 PM
    As for me, I concur with the Golden Girl..definitely worth several reads.

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 10:53:00 AM
    You did a great job on this!

  1. Date: 2/28/2013 8:28:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading this lovely poem.

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 3:38:00 PM
    Love the ebb and flow of the second verse. Here's a nod to the God that sent us the moon. And all of it's powers that make lovers swoon. :)

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 10:31:00 AM
    And you used is so well love this one Debra gonna sit and read it a few more times xx