Moon Fables

whispering low tides lunar fables washed ashore articulate waves ================================= For Rauls "reflections" contest!

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Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 7:30:00 PM

amazing

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/6/2010 5:25:00 PM

loved the last line a great conclusion! Light & Love

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/23/2009 6:59:00 PM

Abe - - Congratulations on your success in Raul’s contest, wonderful job with this poetic challenge – God Bless, mj

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/19/2009 2:34:00 AM

Congratulations Abe, on your success in Raul’s Reflections contest with this very descriptive and beautiful poem. Your poetic skills shine in this one. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/11/2009 8:17:00 PM

Look who made it to the top of the Hot Poems!! :) Congratulations Abe!!!

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/11/2009 10:15:00 AM

Short and beautiful pice of poetry, congrats on ya spot on the charts as well. Have a great day. :):)

Anthony Nutter

Date: 12/11/2009 2:34:00 AM

A sure winner congratulations on making the hot list.

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 12/10/2009 1:09:00 PM

i like the low tides thing

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 12/10/2009 1:08:00 PM

dude congratz on ur win!

Chris Goombi

Date: 12/10/2009 12:53:00 PM

Great haiku, loved it. CG

Sophie Marie Mckee

Date: 12/10/2009 12:12:00 PM

nice one !!!!

Tyler Martin

Date: 12/10/2009 12:02:00 PM

Congrats on your win. TM

Darleen Bilyeu

Date: 12/10/2009 8:08:00 AM

I ddn't realize that you placed!!! great job!!!

Darleen Bilyeu

Date: 12/10/2009 8:04:00 AM

I've always wished to see the ocean. This is a great discription!!! lovely!!!

Daniel Perez

Date: 12/10/2009 7:59:00 AM

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Daniel Neal

Date: 12/9/2009 11:39:00 PM

Amazing words describing that wonderful photo. DN

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 12/9/2009 11:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win in Raul's contest.

Rebekkah Autaubo

Date: 12/9/2009 11:15:00 AM

i wonder wat inspired u to write zis poem? very, very rightous indeed ur an awesome poet:)(:

Walker Neese

Date: 12/9/2009 9:04:00 AM

this poem is just a taste of coolness wish i coulda seen the pic that inspired you to write it. ya buddy walker

Daniel Perez

Date: 12/9/2009 7:57:00 AM

lovely haiku Mr.L nice job placing

Krista Kurth

Date: 12/9/2009 6:15:00 AM

wonderfully evocative haiku Abe. I grew up on the ocean and your poem immediately brought a clear beautiful image of moon bathed tidal flats with ripples in the sand! Thanks for commenting on my winter poem. All the best, Krista

Steve Edmonds

Date: 12/8/2009 11:05:00 AM

Congrats on your placement.

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/8/2009 12:34:00 AM

Your poem is making up the hot list like a rocket...Raul

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/7/2009 10:58:00 PM

WOW! Beautiful Haiku! Awesome imagery! Very creative works of the pen. Inspiring. Good luck on the contest. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poems.

Embree James Lovin

Date: 12/7/2009 12:26:00 PM

dude thats awesome i love it so much your my idol!elovin