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Moon Dance

Once upon a time so brightly
I had this compulsion to dance
Just holding you oh so tightly;
In thoughts of romantic perchance
Realistic dreams of nuance.
Your silver beam of love the lure
Bathed in splendour ever so pure
In breath upon the breeze clement;
Held here within your light the cure
I thank the lord for this moment.

by harry horsman
for nette onclaud 'let's dance' contest

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  1. Date: 1/27/2013 1:39:00 PM
    Thanks for sharing. This is a well thought out poem- The wording pulled me into thought. Thanks. LEGANDWRITER

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 11:10:00 PM
    Harry, congrats once again on your win... i want to thank you for your nice comment..always..pd

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 11:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Let's Dance" contest Harry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 3:29:00 PM
    congrats on your win in the contest; I'm happy to re-read this one on the winners' list :-)

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 1:40:00 AM
    Realistic dreams of nuance... wow! now you make me want to dance with you! beautiful piece Harry, good luck on the contest

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    Date: 3/18/2012 1:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    no need for luck, Congrats is in the order! wonderful :)
  1. Date: 3/17/2012 5:18:00 PM
    Well, it's on the list at least. Congratulations, Harry. A special poem!!

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 3:30:00 PM
    you romantic you..harry:) This is magnificent poem,the wonderful flow in the rhymes.Its perfect! Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 2:59:00 PM
    breathtakingly soulful, harry… congrats on your win in my contest :) huggs

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 12:43:00 PM
    Very nice Harry. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 11:58:00 AM
    congrats Harry luv on a super win for this wonderful moon dance .. very expressive lines of superb imagery flows.. happy weekend...

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 8:36:00 AM
    congratulations in the contest with a beautiful dance.

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 12:50:00 PM
    Very nice and romantic Harry...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...thanks for the nice comments...Marty

  1. Date: 3/16/2012 9:45:00 AM
    Oh, such a sweet-romantic piece on "dance". like how you put the word 'clement' there, Good luck Harry, huggs

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 9:12:00 PM
    awesome, it' s a fave of Charma too!!

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 9:49:00 AM
    This poem has the romantic WoW Factor-Just beautiful and going tmf.. the poet too:)-cHARMA

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 9:42:00 AM
    A lovely, romantic entry. Good luck Harry. Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/15/2012 6:20:00 AM
    You can tell lots of thoughts of romance went into your write Harry..Its just lovely xxx Hugs

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 8:56:00 PM
    ooh la la. I LOVE this, Harry. Love that word "clement" you come up with such great vocabulary even in a little fun poem like this one.!! YOu know what. Maybe this even works for the "lure" contest!! A FAVE

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 6:20:00 PM
    enjoyed reading your work!! Thanks for reading my nonsense....;)

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 5:23:00 PM
    hey harry, I think this is a delightful entry for the dancing contest, romantic and lovely...thank you for your sweet words on 'finish this verse', I wasn't sure about it so it's encouraging to get some positive feedback! :-)