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Moon and Sun

Moon and Sun conversed one day debating which one lead the way to happiness for those who gaze at sun and moon so far away- Sun claimed warmth and sunbeams bright- moon claimed romance thru the night- Sun said flowers lean toward me- moon said my light leads the way- moon said I can change my look- crescent, full and in-between- sun came back with this to say- my warmth makes for a lovely day- sun and moon finally agreed to become one and eclipsed that day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/3/2015 11:23:00 PM
This is one of the best poems I've read in all of today. Love the topic and imagery
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Richard Cook
Date: 6/12/2015 8:33:00 PM
you seem to be the only poet who comments about my poetry. thank you, you are very kind.

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