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The dreamy lovers walk  
And gaze at Earth -
A pretty marble ball.
Their home since birth,
This dreary lunar base,
So lacking mirth.
But, oh, imagine turf
Or kissing by a firth.

for Lisa's contest, 21st April

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  1. Date: 6/30/2013 3:10:00 PM
    congrats on your win ;}

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 9:59:00 PM
    Always enjoy your writes, Jack! Another well deserved win! Congratulations, my friend. x Annalise

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 1:03:00 PM
    I enjoyed and admired this your clever write so much... Congrats on your win~A.O

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 7:29:00 AM
    Jack - Soooooo original and fun to read. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 2:51:00 AM
    like 'dreary lunar base'...nice line

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 2:51:00 PM
    you came up with some interesting rhymes with earth!!very clever as always, my friend.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 5:06:00 PM
    Got a chuckle in this one..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visits..Sara

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 5:02:00 PM
    A charming write that catches the reader's attention with your enchanting imagery.. thanks for the welcome-back greeting... well done, my friend!..)

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 4:11:00 PM
    I have to admit, you go me to look up what a firth was, I never heard of that before, but it fits the poem very wondrously! Oh but what would life be like on the moon, would it be dreary?...I'd say it would be! This poem is perfect for the contest, I like the perspective that you brought with this piece! Such a fantastic poem, Great Work!!