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Moon

Liberating Luna Luna is making her rounds again Arrayed in her full circle of bright light. . . Casting her luminous rays on bare emotions She barges into the private sanctuary Of the psyche with the powerful thrust Of her surreal self and her imaginings. She offers the promise of lunacy to lean on While shifting the seas to her command. Luna moves through the nuance of night quietly, Often veiled by the shadows of passing clouds, But her radiant silver sheen may still be seen Through glowing mist as she enchants the sky. If you want to feel the full ecstasy of her might Swim or bathe naked in her light! © 2013 April For Lisa Cooper Poetessdarkly's "From here to the moon and back Contest"

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Date: 12/29/2013 5:05:00 AM
Very nice verse. I can fell the power of your words in this poem. Not sure what all contest stuff is about, this poem stands on it's own merit. ~Kilmer
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Date: 5/25/2013 9:54:00 AM
contest or no contest, to me no matters, i love this Connie, and i like it a lot...
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Date: 5/18/2013 12:04:00 PM
"Say it's not moon love, tell me it's true love." That's Freddy Martin stealing from Tschaikowsky. Maybe this tune was popular before you were born. Anywho. I like the strength of your description - Love, daver
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Date: 5/1/2013 1:53:00 PM
Yes I agree a delightful verse. Light & Love
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Date: 4/30/2013 8:45:00 AM
WOW. Exceptional writing skill and imagery.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/30/2013 4:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Karen. This didn't make the list, but I sure am enjoying the lovely comments members are leaving. Mahalo, Connie
Date: 4/28/2013 1:29:00 AM
Hey, there Connie, just seeing this one again. Looks like neither one of us won with our moon poems!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/30/2013 4:31:00 PM
I know, and I liked yours a lot. I think I should have entered one that was more romantic? I am happy with the nice comments, so no worries. Mahalo
Date: 4/23/2013 6:36:00 PM
Lovely idea.......that last line !! I bet you will have some company now that you've let your secret out! :) Lovely poem, and such fun!
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Date: 4/23/2013 8:07:00 AM
wow... wow... I love the introduction... Liberating Luna" This is the best exquisite piece I read before a poem begins. I love all the swimming thoughts in this poem Connie.... thanks for the nice comment... xox~ PD
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Date: 4/19/2013 6:41:00 AM
Connie, yep....been there...BUTT it was fun...no bun intended. ;)
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Date: 4/18/2013 3:15:00 PM
connie, I love that last suggestion you gave. sure would enjoy a moonlight skinny dip!! Did I see this one before? It's very lovely.
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Date: 4/17/2013 4:58:00 PM
I absolutely love this poem. Outstanding and very well written. Thanks for your comment on my poem. O'er The Battlements I Do Roam. All my best, Terry.
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Date: 4/17/2013 1:51:00 AM
- A very well written poem .... Mystery in the moonlight ... Good luck in the contest Connie! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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