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Moon

The moon looks so perfect the way it is in the night sky It has a strange effect The way the moon and the stars tie They look flawless up there It is so stunning i wonder what it looks like here Is it just the same or is it something not worth seeing I believe nothing compares to the night That not even an angel could i dont know if i am right but if i could know I would

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Date: 5/30/2009 4:17:00 PM
Yes, it would be spectacular to see the galaxy while sitting on the moon, Zach! Who knows, maybe someday it will be possible. The night sky is a great source of inspiration for this interesting poem. Love, Carolyn
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