Get Your Premium Membership

Moods

MOODS frothing clouds unfetter the blooming orb of the red sun haloed by tangerine dawn the trees. still. listening to God. the path of the tropical river in song alldeday…alldeday…long surrounding hills ever changing as the day goes sliding along slipping into chameleon clothing revelation of sadness and joy join hues from morning sun to eventide when the coyote moon illuminates dusk aroonite…aroonite…long bellows to shadows below waltzing magically slow 1/8/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/22/2017 3:24:00 AM
An enjoyable read! Congrats!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/21/2017 8:09:00 PM
The time of day is evident in the metaphors. It flows well and is a good write. Congrats to you and blessings, Janis.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2017 8:43:00 PM
Thank you, Janis!
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2017 8:43:00 PM
Thank you, Janis!
Date: 1/9/2017 6:26:00 AM
Wow, this was incredibly beautiful Kim. Really nicely done.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2017 8:01:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!

Book: Shattered Sighs