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Moods

It was easer in my prime, in my twenties Then would be this place I would allude Ive a nicle nor a dime, down to the pennies Though never used to care much for food Back then was just sublime, the nineties Though then I did have a different attitude Emotional, is it a crime these tendencies? I'm asked why I'm always in such a mood I whine, are we not our own worst enemies And here I am yet again drowning in solitude Not feeling so fine, surviving on amenities Im told boo hoo!, though people can be rude Now a different time and space, now memories But here is just some where that I want to elude If I could again find cloud nine, but out of remedy’s So I think for now maybe it's better I just conclude Again with this doing what I did with other writes Kaliedoscope/older and wonderer playing around with words some of these taken from old poem sublime some from a poem I wrote called introspection just againexpressing day to day feelings MOODS,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, inspierdby past and current events written by myself davidsott,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, feb 2013

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Date: 5/11/2013 1:03:00 PM
David...Bravo! I love your word choices and reflection given to your life experience. I relate to so much of this beautiful poem. Especially the "drowning in solitude". I also love " If I could again find cloud nine, but of remedies". I am sure we all must have these feelings.
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Date: 5/11/2013 9:36:00 AM
Good morning my sweet friend David from Texas, thank you for all the nice and lovely visits in the past. After seeing and hearing the things that go on in this world, gives me reason to pray and never take my true poet friends for granted. Enjoy the greatest people and things in life. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *LINDA
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Date: 5/8/2013 8:57:00 PM
You expressed moods very well David ...
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Date: 5/8/2013 1:45:00 PM
yes, this one reads like moods!! showing different moods that the different years have inspired in you!
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Date: 5/8/2013 12:12:00 PM
Nice poem.
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