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Monsters Move Over

Ok guys, now listen-up It's time we're moving on Yeah it's been fun, but sure enough The good times here, are gone Now, We have to realize that it's been several years That little boy, has grown-up And now has other fears Remember Lou, what you used to do At the foot of the poor boys bed I thought the kid, would poop his pants When you cut off your head And Chuck, with all those sounds Like a creaking closet door Made every haunt we pulled Seamed to scare him so much more The rest of you, you did your best In messing with his head Living here in cramped conditions Underneath his bed I wish I, still could say We could make him, fear for life But that job has now been taken For he has a gained a wife

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Date: 10/15/2014 12:36:00 AM
Funny and full with humor, Jerry, congrats
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Date: 10/14/2014 12:28:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats lovely to see this in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/12/2014 9:32:00 AM
Absolutely precious! My Hubby loved it! Especially the ending... Wonder why? LOL... Fun write!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/12/2014 10:23:00 AM
Thanks Carol and Hubby
Date: 10/10/2014 7:17:00 PM
a delightful piece of writing jerry
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/12/2014 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Liam
Date: 10/7/2014 8:38:00 PM
Hah! Great ending for a very good poem which takes a swipe at how you 5tormented poor old Lou. Heck, tormenting Lou was just on the job training for the day he took a wife . . .
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/8/2014 6:40:00 AM
Thanks JB
Date: 10/7/2014 12:37:00 PM
This is well done Jerry, creepy, and awesome. Enjoy your day, Love ~SKAT~
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/7/2014 6:49:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Skat---Best Wishes
Date: 10/7/2014 10:12:00 AM
the gang breaks and all because of a new wife?...lol, happy days will always be remembered... amazing, jerry.. huggs
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/7/2014 6:48:00 PM
Thank you Nette
Date: 10/7/2014 6:25:00 AM
Haha..The wife is worst than the monsters themselves..Lady monster..Haha..Very entertaining..Poor guy..I pity him : )
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/7/2014 6:32:00 AM
Thank you Charmaine---It's true, I have a couple of friends that have it ruff, but it makes for a good write, eh ?
Date: 10/6/2014 10:59:00 PM
Its always the wife..sigh..I love your monsters and Ill bet it does well...BG
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/7/2014 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Mystic, tickling your funny bone is why I write---and with my hat and boots, why, am almost as tall as the bloke in the picture.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/7/2014 6:24:00 AM
In all fairness Barbara it's not always the wife----sometimes a girl friend can do the job just as well, LOL---You know I'm kidding---thank you for you encouraging words.
Date: 10/6/2014 7:36:00 PM
Oh Jerry that was so funny, what a lovely surprise to turn on my computer first thing in the morning and click on to this poem, nice to have a laugh to start the day off, thank you for sharing and take care............Vera..............
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/6/2014 7:46:00 PM
Thank you Vera, I laugh went writing this stuff, so much so, I can't stop !
Date: 10/6/2014 6:16:00 PM
I love it Jerry. I thought I would die when I read line 11. Keep these jewels coming.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/6/2014 7:24:00 PM
Thank you Brenda , you're to kind.
Date: 10/6/2014 5:58:00 PM
Oh, hahaha..............Didn't see that ending coming...........Quite funny this!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/6/2014 6:13:00 PM
Thank Gry----In life---There is aways something comeing
Date: 10/6/2014 5:46:00 PM
lol....love it my friend
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/6/2014 6:13:00 PM
Thanks Tim for reading my stuff
Date: 10/6/2014 5:23:00 PM
Humourous write as ever Jerry Good luck if its for the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 10/6/2014 5:31:00 PM
Thanks Jan , I can use all the luck you can spare, What ? you didn't know where luck comes from----don't worry---I always wish it back. lol

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