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Monsters lurk within the depths of my soul feeding upon my primitive urges. And feigning normalcy, veiled in shadows, they're invisible, thus invincible. They exist in-between sane and insane able to influence reality. And despite my defenses, wander free, causing turmoil and havoc in my life. Fear's an accomplice and effective shield, ensuring their motives are well concealed. And probing where there's the least resistance, they affect who I am and how I feel. They can corrupt my soul with hate and greed, gnawing away at my concepts of fair. And oft twist reality out of shape, until whatever feels good now feels right. But when I confront them, they flee inside, where they get temporarily restrained. For I can't destroy my inner demons, my only course is to lock them away. (Blank Verse) 9/21/2015

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/26/2018 7:28:00 PM

Well penned, Emile.

Edlynn Nau

Date: 11/2/2015 12:18:00 PM

UHHHH! Excellent! ACTUAL Blank Verse with correct syllable count, wonderful images & plot. Here is the nightmare within and waging war against the monsters we hold at bay (or try). This is a 7 (and I don't hand those out easily or it wouldn't mean anything). Superb.

Edlynn Nau
Date: 11/2/2015 6:25:00 PM

You are in no one's debt for sharing your gift! If anything, we are in your debt for the Sharing. We are all richer people whenever art is made available. . . As it MUST be.

Emile Pinet
Date: 11/2/2015 6:08:00 PM

Edlynn, once again I am in your debt, thank you. Emile.

Skat A

Date: 10/14/2015 10:25:00 PM

Emile, Congratulations on your awesome win. SKAT :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/15/2015 9:32:00 AM

Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/13/2015 11:51:00 PM

Wonderful take on the theme Emile with this superb winning write! Big congrats!

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/14/2015 10:31:00 AM

Thanks Upma, I appreciate your comments, you are one of my biggest supporters. Emile.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/13/2015 4:46:00 PM

Human beings are capable of the most heinous crimes. The monsters are within some of us that release them from within. Congratulations Emile! On your Win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/14/2015 10:32:00 AM

Thanks Michael, I appreciate your unwavering support and comments. Emile.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/13/2015 4:33:00 PM

Oh how true this is Emile and Poe was absolutely right...Interesting that the only monster you mention by name is 'Fear' which really hits the mark because in my opinion, EVERY inner monster and all evil that results comes from that single one...GREAT write and congratulations - Tim

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/14/2015 10:33:00 AM

Thanks Tim, I appreciate your insightful comments. Emile.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/13/2015 11:41:00 AM

Most of us are locking them in our stronghold! Wonder if anyone has let them go?

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/14/2015 10:34:00 AM

Thanks Balveen, I appreciate your comments. Emile.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/22/2015 6:06:00 AM

What a very touched poem, I love your insightful write.... You're such a genius writer. Those monster can not be chased away as you described it they can be suppressed with good mood and hope. Your flow smoothly within the readers mind and sense. A very brilliant and eloquent piece, hope to see this in the winner list......stay blessed........A.M.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/22/2015 8:08:00 AM

Thanks so much Afolabi, your friendly comments are much appreciated. Emile.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/21/2015 3:19:00 PM

Excellent Emile. Very clever and real. This will do well in the contest. Great write!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/21/2015 4:19:00 PM

Thanks Michael, I appreciate your friendly comments. Emile.