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Monsters Are Real

In hushed whispers, Mariners told stories, Of a octopus like cephalopod creature; With a tentacled beak and jet thrust power, A creature as long as a school bus. Scientists dismissed all this as just myth, But they did admit that there may be; Giant creatures roaming the dark, deep oceans, However in 2007 one was netted. The New Zealand trawler San Aspiring, Fishing in the Ross Sea of Antarctica; Netted something, 34 feet long, 1000 pounds, A giant monster, it was a colossal squid. But more amazing was that this female, Was considered a comparative midget; Colossal Squids can grown to 46 feet long, They are the largest creatures on Earth. Having the biggest eyes of any other animal, The size of basketballs with huge pupils; Also, it is said that they are highly aggressive, Even attacking predators like Sperm Whales. Gouges and battle scars on whales, unexplained, The gigantic female, in a lab somewhere, frozen. ______________________ August 21, 2015 Verse For the contest, Giant Animals Honorable Mention

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Date: 9/18/2015 1:39:00 PM
Broken, well done... SKAT
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Date: 9/16/2015 10:56:00 PM
Wonderful write n win broken! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/16/2015 6:45:00 PM
Hi Broken, stopping back to congratulate you on your win. Enjoyed reading this again. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/16/2015 4:16:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/16/2015 12:50:00 PM
thank you
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Date: 9/10/2015 3:47:00 PM
wow, so glad I chose this one to read, my friend - awesome & fascinating
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Date: 8/25/2015 1:50:00 PM
- A giant monster, really .... Wooow - A wonderful writing, it will make a hit in the contest - Good luck, dear B.W. !! - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/21/2015 3:52:00 PM
I do hate it when monsters are caught...we should leave them be...I have yet to see a sea monster hooking a giant human on it's fisning line. Sometimes it's better to allow mysteries, stay mysteries. I feel for the frozen creature.
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Date: 8/21/2015 3:43:00 PM
I had no idea about this stuff, Constance. Wow, you chose the largest animal of all , according to what this says!! I never imagined it would be a giant Squid!!! Very informative!
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Date: 8/21/2015 1:40:00 PM
Your word choices are clever, descriptive, and imaginative giving life to this poem while the imagery helped to give it depth and feeling. Emile.
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Date: 8/21/2015 12:58:00 PM
the female is truly God's Art....the place where birth must start....and violence if danger if harm approaches her seed....with the most Beautiful being the human breed....;)
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Date: 8/21/2015 12:22:00 PM
Oh dear....I'd had to get tangled up in one of those, dear. Very informative yet chilling write, Broken Wings. :) Soupmail dear...
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Date: 8/21/2015 12:07:00 PM
Amazing write, Broken! I love how you imaged this awesome creature with your poetic words. I have seen many documentaries about them...very intriguing for sure. Best wished in the contest! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/21/2015 10:00:00 AM
Now that could feed an entire village. Very informative.
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Date: 8/21/2015 8:47:00 AM
Very informative, it would very scary to run across one in a small boat. Good luck in the contest and congrat. on being on the very top of the list on Member Poets All-time Hugs Eve
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