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Monsoon Mojo

Let's go out and frolic in the rain Shove aside all cares and be vain, In this stormy night from nothing refrain Neither cry foul nor complain, Drench to the core and raise cain, Clap with the thunder once again And blaze a trail in the lightning domain, Drive this sassy storm insane Within our palms its tears contain-- And then...ha, kiss the rain! ~"Rain" contest by Silent One. ~02/24/2013 ~"Your Best Poem" contest by Shadow Hamilton

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Robert Lindley

Date: 12/24/2015 4:20:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this fine poem!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 12/24/2015 3:26:00 AM

Greetings Abdul. Congrats for your WIN in the contest! ;-)

Skat A

Date: 12/24/2015 2:13:00 AM

ABDUL, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/24/2015 1:52:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this lovely write Abdul!

Angie Thomas

Date: 10/11/2014 12:36:00 AM

congrats on your big win! :)

Angie Thomas

Date: 10/11/2014 12:35:00 AM

congrats on your big win! :)

Mark Trichet

Date: 10/10/2014 7:59:00 PM

Man I love this Mojo you got goin on here Abdul. Tremendous, bravo

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/10/2014 12:50:00 PM

I was captured by the title, something I think is often overlooked. You certainly had your mojo going on this one. Congrats. BG

Abdul Malik
Date: 10/10/2014 6:03:00 PM

Yes, you are right. I give more thoughts to the title than the actual poem. The poem flows from the title. I have to have the title first. Thanks for your thoughtful comments.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/10/2014 9:07:00 AM

Congratulations to your No.1 spot Abdul! Your work is really a legendary art in pen! :-)

Abdul Malik
Date: 10/10/2014 9:28:00 AM

Thanks. Appreciate much.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2014 8:04:00 AM

- On top of the winner list ... with a beautiful poem, Abdul ! - Congratulations! - Happy weekend:) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Abdul Malik
Date: 10/10/2014 9:29:00 AM

Thanks a lot.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/10/2014 6:53:00 AM

I can see how this poem made it to the top of the podium, it is such a beautiful poem. It's going to my favourites. Congratulations on your win.

Abdul Malik
Date: 10/10/2014 9:27:00 AM

I am honored! This is my favorite too. Appreciate your generous comments.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/10/2014 5:35:00 AM

Nicely done rhymes, congrats on the win, Abdul

Abdul Malik
Date: 10/10/2014 9:32:00 AM

Thanks a lot.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2014 2:20:00 AM

Love the thought of frolicking in the rain - fabulous write - many congrats:-) hugs jan xxxxx

Abdul Malik
Date: 10/10/2014 9:31:00 AM

Thanks Jan.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2014 2:10:00 AM

Congratulations my dear poet friend, Abdul. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora

Abdul Malik
Date: 10/10/2014 9:33:00 AM

You are being generous. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2013 5:11:00 PM

wow, Abdul, this is SO nice. another great poetry entry from you. I am impressed!