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Monorhyme

Matching like-minded zones Multiple kindred cones Myriad tribal bones Misplaced grammar atones Marriage of stars and stones Mosaic blended tones Merry musical thrones 10/26/20

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/5/2020 8:03:00 PM

This is a magnificent rhyme, Michelle. I really love the way you have it formatted here. Saved to read again :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/27/2020 10:22:00 PM

WoW! Michelle, What a good entry for the “ Pleiades 3” contest. And it’s in monoryme too. I would be surprised if I didn’t see you as a top contender with this well written piece. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/28/2020 9:17:00 PM

I still think this is impressive. Enjoy the rest of your evening:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/28/2020 1:51:00 PM

Sadly this didn't get a placement but am happy for your thoughts, thanks a bunch :)

John Watt

Date: 10/27/2020 3:57:00 PM

How challenging this must have been to monorhyme with only 6 syllables allowed per line... you pulled it off adeptly, with your usual poetic grace. I thought I would like "Marriage of stars and stones" best, then I read "Mosaic blended tones". Let's call it a tie (and eat some scones).

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/27/2020 10:16:00 PM

I actually considered using scones in the poem but thrones worked out better - am always happy for your feedback:)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/27/2020 7:55:00 AM

Michelle, The Monorhyme that pulls back the blinds. Good luck in all games of chance. -Richard

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/27/2020 10:18:00 PM

I've never been lucky at games of chance, but maybe that will change now!

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/26/2020 7:47:00 PM

Your artistry and intellect never fails to amaze me, Michelle. Every moment of your poem is exquisite, but "Marriage of stars and stones" blows my mind! A wonderful entry for the contest. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my friend.. ~Susan

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/26/2020 8:17:00 PM

You always brighten my day (or evening in this case) with your warmth and joyous spirit, Susan, hoping you are doing well~

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/26/2020 4:54:00 PM

Mystical, musical and magical my friend. Love the "misplaced grammar stones." Best of luck in the contest. Soup mail.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/26/2020 7:06:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sam - got the soupmail :)