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Battle of the Sexes: Over the best of three sets tennis history was made! Acrostic Drugs: Fall for oceanic allure, not cocaine. Affection: By the bubbling brook bees bond with buttercups. Disillusion: My dreams are like soap bubbles – they keep popping. Spoilsport: He quashed all their ideas, but finally spared a thought! ------------------------- Contest: 5 One Liners Sponsor: Bev Smith

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/24/2016 11:08:00 PM

Cool monoku string. My favorites are Affection and Disillusion. The former for it's cutesy image and alliteration, the latter for it's humor at your own misfortune. I've read some of the entries to this contest, a little bit ago, but I never understood the "battle of the sexes" lines ... might have to explain! Lol...

Paul Callus
Date: 2/25/2016 1:11:00 PM

I had forgotten about this contest! The Battle of the Sexes monoku was a must write, included in the rules. Mine deals with a challenge between a male and female tennis players, won by the female...thus it made history (poetically it has little value!). // paul

Hija De La Luna

Date: 12/17/2015 11:12:00 PM

I enjoyed these monoku strings, Paul! I think ill try this!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/18/2015 12:05:00 PM

Thank you Hija:) Lately we have been having several contests based on one-liners. I encourage you to have a go...it's fun! ~ Regards // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/15/2015 5:43:00 AM

Hey Paul how are you, I wasn't able to reply yet to your mail, was busy.. By the way, I PASSED!!! =`) YEY! regarding this poetry i really love the affection.. :D hehehe =`) i like words with double letter consonants.. =`) hugs!still to catch up!!! wahhh!~Olive Eloisa =)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/15/2015 9:30:00 AM

Weeeee!!! Congratulations Olive_eloi!:)) Never mind...busy is a good sign...glad I'm not the only one! Priorities first:) Hugss // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2015 7:08:00 PM

I loved reading these. Affection is darling!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/15/2015 9:12:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Affection was meant for the alliteration one line contest, but did not get there in time. ~ Regards // paul

David Mohn

Date: 12/13/2015 5:43:00 PM

Billy Jean won but was it "rigged". I don't think so :) interesting stings of one liners Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 12/14/2015 4:23:00 AM

Thanks David. I wanted her to win, and have always convinced myself that it was a fair result!:) ~ Regards // paul

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/13/2015 5:38:00 AM

I like this and enjoyed it very much ... CayCay

Paul Callus
Date: 12/13/2015 9:00:00 AM

Thank you CayCay. ~ All the best. ~~ Paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/13/2015 12:20:00 AM

Excellent. Well done. Always pleasure to read your work. Thanks for sharing it.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/13/2015 10:59:00 AM

You are always welcome, Ravi:) Thank you for the lovely comments. Regards // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/13/2015 12:13:00 AM

Always such a pleasure to drop by here for a read! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/13/2015 10:58:00 AM

...and it's my pleasure to have you stopping by, Arthur:) All the best. // paul

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/12/2015 6:47:00 PM

Dear Paul This is funny Paul like the whole picture you've written in images my friend lol got the irony in both sets, but these blend so well together awesome pic also for these verses, like the likes about the soap bubbles popping, simply humorous, and thanks for your descriptive comment on my blue ridge poem, I like to do a little bit of home style for the holidays, cheri

Paul Callus
Date: 12/13/2015 10:47:00 AM

Thank you for a lovely and pleasant visit, Cherl. These one liners were meant to be a product of some humor and light poetry; glad you enjoyed. ~ All the best. // paul