Monoku- Reverse Angles

mumurs of silvered petals - willows whisper in the wind

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Heidie Buys

Date: 8/5/2008 3:01:00 PM

So very magical Brian. Superb. Regards Heidie

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/5/2008 2:39:00 PM

Wonderful poem. God Bless Phyl

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/5/2008 11:48:00 AM

I hear them. Such a lovely write. Love, Shar

P Sheart

Date: 8/5/2008 10:55:00 AM

Hi Brian Oh so beautiful! "Willows whisper in the wind" I just love the feel to that. Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia

James Foulk

Date: 8/5/2008 10:47:00 AM

like the last line willows whisper in the wind, just beautiful saying. enjoyed reading this short piece. thank you for reading my poem and for your comment.

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 8/5/2008 5:56:00 AM

...and what delightful secrets they share...love the willow tree and this monoku - blessings hun, love Kristin