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Monoku 2

she knew of longing — this dream of love, alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/23/2013 1:41:00 PM
interesting monoku, poignant, pulls at the heartstrings...I don't think the comment below is actual criticism, it just seems like someone being rather silly
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Jack Jordan
Date: 5/23/2013 1:48:00 PM
You're probably right. In fact, I thought it was quite humorous.
Date: 5/22/2013 3:22:00 PM
This is mooooooonnnnnnnnnooooooookkkkkkkkkkkuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!
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Date: 4/16/2013 9:26:00 PM
why Jack, this sounds like me... :-) always a fan ~ Linda
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Jack Jordan
Date: 4/16/2013 9:31:00 PM
I'm a fan in return... Jack

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