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The Money Note Bad time for shipping and I had no work, slept on the sofa in my mother’s small flat, she sat up late drinking coffee, reading and smoking cigarettes. I had a small unemployment benefit, mother took most of it for lodging, I spent most days outside trying to find work and sometimes I was lucky and got a temporary job as a washing up at a cafe or cleaning the floors. The old church in town was open to eight in the evening I often went there to rest and sort of half sleep, one day in the front of me I saw a big money note -500 coronas- picked it up, put it in my pocket and debated whether to keep it or give it to the verger; then organ music started can’t bear it and I left. I thought of dinner and a nice bottle of wine, took a closer look at the note, it was 500 coronas ok, only it was monopoly money and quite useless, back in the church I put the note in the collection box.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/6/2015 4:26:00 AM
A very evocative piece You have a great eye for detail, atmosphere and story-telling. Would like to read a short story by you
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 4/7/2015 1:16:00 PM
thank you, PV Harrington

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