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Money Bags

Dark circles cradle her eyes enlarged they turn grey when will she realize as she hustles everyday when it's in her hands it sours still there's no sanitizer to remove the stain that devours the sweetness left to the analyzer I lose no sleep anymore I've come to peace with my desire yet she thinks of this green evermore and wakes up every hour to acquire she gets her assistance from friends and family as well when she cleans her face the tear ascends out of eyes that swell I wish her not for richness brags but for abundance instead sleep well my little money bags for her my heart has bled *This poem is about a friend of mine. It's not about me.

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Date: 3/22/2021 7:16:00 AM
I feel bad for people who exchange their lives for money. Well expressed.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 3/25/2021 11:32:00 AM
Thank you, Richard :)
Date: 3/17/2021 10:53:00 AM
Another excellent write my friend :)
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 3/25/2021 11:31:00 AM
Thank you, Akkina :)
Date: 3/3/2021 11:31:00 AM
The bible talks of money as evil many times, in each generation of history and every era, money has brought misery, boredom, drug addiction. Money is power and power is abused. It is one of my favorite subjects to debate about. Awesome write, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 3/6/2021 2:33:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. Yes, money is behind it all. Wishing you a wonderful weekend :)
Date: 3/2/2021 2:00:00 PM
Money is often termed as an evil necessity. Unfortunately greed can dirty that money, and yet for some it means enough to live another day. ~ Best regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 3/6/2021 2:20:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. You're absolutely correct. Hope you're having a great weekend :)
Date: 3/1/2021 11:05:00 PM
Is this a poem on avarice for money? It is great as a dark poem. Money alone does not bring you happiness.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 3/6/2021 2:19:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. Yes, it's about greed. Have a great weekend :)
Date: 3/1/2021 4:29:00 PM
Excellent poetry, Angela, on the dark side of life.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 3/6/2021 2:19:00 PM
Thank you, Harry. Wishing you a wonderful weekend :)

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