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Monet's Garden

On jade stems iris blooms gently swayed in hues of lavender, dusty pink and mauve until pollen seekers were lured to the banquet of sweetmeats. Within velvet petals they feasted. In Monet's garden the buddings grew in variegated colors brushed on a canvas. Pastel beauties that no fingers dared to cut, for to be clipped at the height of life meant death.

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Date: 3/9/2023 3:49:00 PM
Pretty
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Date: 2/21/2023 7:52:00 PM
You've caught the vibrancy of Monet's garden so well. Your final line rings true. Cut flowers have a short life span indeed. Sincerest regards, Brian
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/21/2023 8:14:00 PM
Thank you very much, Brian.
Date: 2/6/2023 2:47:00 PM
Jenna, a beautiful poem, you captured the essence of Monet's art!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/6/2023 4:32:00 PM
Thanks very much, Tania.
Date: 2/6/2023 6:16:00 AM
You depict the Artist's Garden with beauty and truth in your lovely words Jenna. :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/6/2023 4:32:00 PM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 2/5/2023 5:34:00 AM
An excellent panoramic scenery in your word-painting my dear friend and poetess Jenna. Thanks for sharing. I love and enjoyed your poem so much. God bless you always and your writints.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/6/2023 4:32:00 PM
Thank you, Len.
Date: 2/4/2023 10:23:00 AM
This is lovely. That last line lingers. xomo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2023 11:36:00 AM
Thanks for your kinds thoughts, Mo.
Date: 2/3/2023 7:34:00 AM
Jenna, jade stems and lavender hues drew mw in! Just lovely words to create beauty! Happy Friday xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2023 11:36:00 AM
Thank you so sincerely, Mike.
Date: 2/3/2023 6:12:00 AM
So nice Jenna you certainly know how to replicate a wonderful Monet in your poetry, and knowing you probably on canvas too, you’re a gifted talent for sure, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2023 11:35:00 AM
aww how sweet a compliment. Thanks so much, David.
Date: 2/3/2023 3:10:00 AM
Lovely, Jenna. You're a treasure. Elizabeth
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2023 11:35:00 AM
Thank you, Elizabeth.
Date: 2/3/2023 2:51:00 AM
Truly lovely Jenna! Debx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2023 11:35:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Deb.
Date: 2/2/2023 9:54:00 PM
Wouldn’t be(e) surprised if the beed tried to suckle the painting. I’ve seen his masterful work. Profound beauty indeed. Worthy poem, JL. Artsy but not fartsy. ~;0)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2023 11:34:00 AM
His work is phenominal. Thanks, AP.
Date: 2/2/2023 5:56:00 PM
Aww beautiful poem, let them keep growing: ) last longer , very gracefully written
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/4/2023 11:34:00 AM
Thank you, Stephan.
Date: 2/2/2023 2:19:00 PM
Monet inspired you well Jenna, his paintings are amazing but then so is your poetry. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/2/2023 2:35:00 PM
You are such an encouraging friend, Tom. Thank you ever so much.

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