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Monet ---Woman In a Garden L867

Lovely maid, in solitaire With parasol and silken hair With hope she dreams, for love she waits For lover's kiss at garden's gate Pastel dreams, of vast array Blending hues of wild bouquet Gardens green, and pallets blue Fields of floral, faded view Blurry image, soft and fair Sense of romance harbors there From soaring wings, soft brush imparts Love's impression fills the heart

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/30/2011 4:42:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie for your win in the contest of Brian Strand "Two Thru Twelve". Love, Carol P. S. I was away and missed congrats on many of Brian's contests. I try but don't know if I will ever catch up.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2011 6:29:00 PM

this is so nice and could very well be used in those kinds of contests about literary works. Congrats on your awesome win with Brian. Finally going thru some of the older lists tonight!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/20/2011 9:29:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your first place win in this contest along with Michael and me .. so amazing your writes..enjoy another great win..luv..

Emma Mantle

Date: 6/20/2011 1:11:00 AM

Congrats on your win Carrie. This is such a beautiful piece and a well deserved win. Best wishes Em :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/19/2011 11:20:00 PM

Copngratulations carrie on your first place in Brian's contest. Love, Joyce

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/12/2009 12:39:00 PM

Beautiful work as always Carrie, I can see why you won first place. You was even killing the contests a year ago. You are a fabulous poetess and I am thankful you are here sharing your work with us, this is one for my fav's...Raul

Elaine George

Date: 12/19/2008 6:24:00 AM

A MASTERPIECE! dear Carrie. Lainie George

Maggie Huscroft

Date: 12/15/2008 5:55:00 AM

I have only just discovered this beauty...i was idly browsing and was rewarded wi†h this perfectly formed mellifluous poem "From soaring wings, a work of art"

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 12/14/2008 11:10:00 PM

beautiful

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/4/2008 11:58:00 PM

Carrie after reading this poem I figured you would win - Congratulations - God Bless

Teresita Cailo

Date: 11/4/2008 8:44:00 PM

My first time to read this Carrie and I must say this' really a deserving first place. Congratulations :)

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 11/4/2008 4:32:00 PM

Carrie Congratulations on your first place win in Brian's contest , great form too wonderfully done! Laura :)

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/4/2008 7:13:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your First Place win in Brian's contest! You are AWESOME! Well deserved! Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 8/26/2008 8:36:00 AM

This is great! I love the free flow of the read and the metre by which it flows. The descriptive qualitry of this is clear and offers the reader enjoyment and some understanding of the beauty which is a Monet. Michael

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/23/2008 11:29:00 AM

Absolutely awesome. You paint with words as only a true artist can. Very well written and a joy to read. Regards Heidie

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/22/2008 10:43:00 AM

Carrie it's truly amazing how the rhyming scheme of this poem allowed it to flow like one beautiful line - Fantastic work - God Bless

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/21/2008 5:36:00 AM

So beautiful Carrie! Art, and more, well captured in words. Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 8/21/2008 12:08:00 AM

On for my favourites I think Carrie.Beautiful ekphrasis.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind comments

James Foulk

Date: 8/20/2008 5:02:00 PM

very colorful and touching piece of beautiful poetry. thank you for reading my hanging around and for your comment.