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Monday Morning

Clouds cry on the grass, Little sprouts springing slowly, waiting for the sun. Quiet, birds chirping; Not a creature bustles today They sleep with the sun. By: Juli-Michelle Motif: Nature/new poem

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/29/2017 6:44:00 PM

Totally delightful. Beautifully done, Julie-Michelle.

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 7/16/2014 10:03:00 PM

Great one Juli-Michelle! I love Haiku!

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/6/2014 6:52:00 PM

What a lovely, and cheerful way to wake up on a Monday morning, !! Love this!

Skat A

Date: 3/20/2014 2:34:00 PM

you write good haiku ~SKAT~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/20/2014 5:00:00 AM

Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win, juli

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2014 4:05:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you Juli.Michelle ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/20/2014 1:01:00 AM

Juli-Michelle , Congrats, awesome win! ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2014 10:36:00 PM

Juli, Impressive like the themes. Congratulations on your win. :) Love ~LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 3/19/2014 5:16:00 PM

congrats on win; I knew beforehand that these haiku were winners :) // paul

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 3/19/2014 3:36:00 PM

Well penned Haiku Juli-Michelle. Congratulations on your win in GV contest.... Verlena

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/19/2014 2:37:00 PM

Nice written..." They sleep with the sun "...super...Best wishes from India...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2014 6:49:00 PM

such a peaceful little vignette on your springtime day!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/17/2014 7:30:00 PM

The first line did it for me, then I was hooked...

A.E. Rivenbark

Date: 3/17/2014 7:05:00 PM

Excellent! Love the quiet hour[s] before dawn. Thanks for a double shot of your beautiful poetry. :D

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/17/2014 6:34:00 PM

The quietness of the morning is soothing to the soul! Your poetry is also. My best, chuck

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2014 12:50:00 PM

- It's spring whispering quietly ..... coming soon - Lovely haiku, Juli- Michelle :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/17/2014 10:30:00 AM

two pretty haiku; love them :) // paul

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/17/2014 10:29:00 AM

Had a very tough... but your cheerful wee poem made my sun shine! Thank you sweetie! Loving hugs, Jack XOX

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/17/2014 10:30:00 AM

"tough WINTER" that is...