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Mom's Boyfriend

I smile and shake your hand, dear Sir It’s just a part of my profession’s code I’d rather pound you down, you worthless cur Even the kindest of us could explode “Suspected Non-Accidental Trauma” So says the overcautious rhetoric Traumatized terror of baby’s mama Plastic smile hides a wide-eyed lunatic I will take amazing care of her child, Father protector flaming in full force But don't mistake my demeanor for mild, Recognize the obligatory farce The neurosurgeon will save her son’s brain If only your hard heart could hear his pain 4/7/16 For contest: It Shouldn’t Hurt to Be a Child Sponsor: Becca Tegan

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Date: 6/11/2016 8:13:00 PM
wow, this is very good writing, Tom. So sad too. A good example for your Animus Contest. And I see this took a win in a contest, so Congrats for that.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/11/2016 9:07:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! One of the toughest parts of my job...
Date: 5/18/2016 9:14:00 PM
Tom, congrats on your placement and this is a great example for your contest. Thank you for sharing! :)-luloo
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/18/2016 9:41:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 4/14/2016 10:04:00 PM
Tom,, congratulations on the honorable mention of your poem. Linda
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/18/2016 10:29:00 AM
Thanks, Linda!
Date: 4/9/2016 4:56:00 PM
Heartfelt indeed...The last two lines are killer lines.....How sad and disturbed the life of a child exposed to abuse can be >> Charma.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/10/2016 6:34:00 AM
It's a window into some serious awfulness. Thanks for reading!
Date: 4/7/2016 1:03:00 PM
How hard it must be to smile and be professional when in front of the one who causes the pain. It takes a very special person to help the truly "sick" people. Bravo.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/7/2016 10:04:00 PM
Thank you. By the time I meet the kid/victim, any proven abuser is in the slammer. But it's hard to prove and easy enough to figure out.
Date: 4/7/2016 12:56:00 PM
These pieces you write through the eyes of your given profession hit so deep and sharp Tom. It must be difficult to maintain your composure at times indeed J.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/7/2016 10:05:00 PM
Thanks, J! Tough stuff is often the more meaningful stuff.

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