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Mommy

tombstone with fresh sod a young mother’s tears have stopped – crayon picture taped ~20 Mar 2014~

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/30/2016 3:39:00 AM

Congratulations on this brilliant poem winning top placement David! ; ) 7

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/30/2016 3:34:00 AM

Wow. So few words, such a basket of emotions. Congratulations, Kai

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/29/2016 1:11:00 PM

Hi David, You expressed a deep sadness in a few words. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/29/2016 12:14:00 PM

Feel the emotion so strong in the few words used. Congrats. Sunita

Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/29/2016 11:13:00 AM

So much expressed in so few lines - congrats on your win, david. Agnes

Lu Loo

Date: 8/29/2016 10:03:00 AM

David, wow...so powerful and sad, just what I was looking for. Senryu are one of my fave forms and you mastered it well...congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest:)-luloo

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/24/2015 3:13:00 PM

Powerfully short and so clear and deep in its grave sadness! Congrats David on your win!

Skat A

Date: 12/24/2015 2:22:00 AM

DAVID, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. **SKAT**

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/23/2015 7:11:00 PM

oh my goodness this really made me cry...wow...seriously ...a7 this wow...

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/23/2015 5:43:00 PM

That last line...like a stab to my heart, David. So very sad and powerful. Congratulations on your win. Sandra

Skat A

Date: 4/9/2014 9:55:00 PM

DAVID, , CONGRATULATIONS....SKAT

David Mohn
Date: 4/10/2014 9:20:00 AM

Thanks SKAT...thought provoking contest

Kim Van Breda

Date: 4/5/2014 8:07:00 AM

Very pointed and emotive write. Love the last line Xx~Xx

David Mohn
Date: 4/6/2014 9:14:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim :)

David Mohn

Date: 4/4/2014 8:57:00 PM

No it's not yet...your so sweet to stop by again....thanks :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2014 6:20:00 PM

Hi David, is this contest out yet... Stopping by to enjoy the sad canvas again :) Linda

David Mohn
Date: 4/4/2014 10:40:00 PM

No it's not yet...your so sweet to stop by again....thanks :)

Donna Jones

Date: 3/27/2014 10:24:00 PM

Sad subject but scene painted very well..

David Mohn
Date: 3/28/2014 6:50:00 PM

Thank you Donna...always appreciate comments from you :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2014 8:30:00 PM

Hi Dave, good luck in the contest... The canvas is sad... xox~ Linda

David Mohn
Date: 3/20/2014 9:02:00 PM

Thanks much Linda...a little on the dark side for me