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Momma Dearest

"I shall be telling this with a sigh" Robert Frost,The Road Less Travelled Momma told me there would be days like this Then she would hug me and give me a big kiss She always made everything seem much better All it ever took was her warm hug and a big kiss I miss my momma so very much today I need a warm hug and big kiss from her My world has been upside down for days I would give anything for her hug and a big kiss Written by: Carol Brown Entry: "Give Me A Kiss, Mommy" contest Written on: 10/12/2011 3rd Place Winner

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Gail Debole

Date: 8/14/2012 6:19:00 PM

Hi Carol - Very sweet poem! Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. - Gail

Cory Long

Date: 8/13/2012 9:47:00 AM

congrats on your poem being featured this week carol..cory

Lionel Ledbetter

Date: 12/14/2011 9:15:00 PM

I've been surfing your site, and you really know poetry. I don't know one type of poetry from another; except for what I learned on your site.

Tyler Lara

Date: 11/8/2011 9:13:00 AM

Great poem Thanks for your support and and comments. im new at this could you provide any useful info?

Don Johnson

Date: 10/26/2011 3:06:00 PM

Still have my momma, lingers still, talks like thunder, loves her still.... On ya sweet Carol Brown

Rosalyn Lampkin

Date: 10/26/2011 11:40:00 AM

Nicely written. Congrats Carol. Lots of hugs and kisses. Rosalyn

Edward Ebbs

Date: 10/26/2011 8:36:00 AM

Congrats Carol, very nice...I hope your world turns right side up soon and I know this is not the same, but here is a )Hug(

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2011 5:43:00 AM

Thank you for your appreciated comments on this write. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 10/25/2011 2:29:00 PM

Congrats, Carol. Beautiful write. Enjoyed. Nice going. luv Ralph

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/25/2011 3:02:00 AM

Carol....if only we could roll back time and get one more kiss from mother....best gift ever. Enjoyed your latest. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2011 11:22:00 PM

A great momma poem, Carol! Congrats on your win and I know your Mom is looking down on you with pride from heaven!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2011 8:50:00 PM

Congrats Carol on a wonderful win with this tremendous write my friend.. am very happy PS is running smoothly again..too...

Valerie Sherman

Date: 10/24/2011 7:37:00 PM

WOW..Carol...great job lady!!! Luv Valerie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/24/2011 5:51:00 PM

Tender writing dear Carol. We never quit missing them. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Judy Ball

Date: 10/24/2011 4:17:00 PM

A beautiful tribute to the love and security a good mother provides for her children. She is in turn remembered for her loving ways. Hugs to you my friend. Maybe not as good as Momma's but it can't hurt. God Bless, JB XXXXXXXXOOOOOOOOOO

Don Johnson

Date: 10/21/2011 5:00:00 PM

My momma wasn't big on the kissing, her momma died when she was little, on a train with strangers she pulled the cord, helped send her momma to the lord, but still with her there's riches... interesting verse Sweet Carol Brown...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2011 6:26:00 PM

We don't know how much we will miss our mothers until they are no longer here..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work.Sara

Journey Mcknight

Date: 10/12/2011 3:08:00 PM

very good writing Carol. -and thank you for the congrats, that was nice of you.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 10/12/2011 2:42:00 PM

A moving write. My mother died at age 48, when I was a young adult. Hers was the first funeral I ever went to. Hope you are well. Love, Robert.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/12/2011 1:54:00 PM

I think you did a wonderful job with this write! I feel that some of the poem was written in a child sense but the second verse was mainly written from the adult viewpoint! And I understand that we all need and desire our mother's love through a kiss and a hug!! What a great write Carol! Incredible job!!

Ingibo Benson

Date: 10/12/2011 12:09:00 PM

Wow! A very thoughtful and interesting write, Carol. I love it that the tone of a child is predominant in the poem. Wishing you luck in the contest. God bless, Ingibo