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Moments With the Moon

~ I saw the moon beyond the mist its glow this darkened sky, it kissed Through branches of an old oak tree as if it waited there for me So as I gaze upon these skies awaiting on the sun to rise I’ll stand here as it’s coming soon and spend these moments with the moon ~

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Jean Bush

Date: 2/11/2020 2:16:00 PM

You really love the moon, don't you? Your lovely, lyrical work shows it clearly.

Chris Green
Date: 2/11/2020 4:01:00 PM

It does inspire me. Thank you again Jean.

John Hamilton

Date: 2/10/2020 9:40:00 AM

Great write Chris I love everything about the moon!

Chris Green
Date: 2/10/2020 10:20:00 AM

Thanks so much John.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/10/2020 9:19:00 AM

The moon's face always looks as if it looking at all of us - I'm sure the moon loved the fact that you chose to spend those precious moments looking back at its wondrous romantic aura. Loved and faved this poem. Blessings, Jennifer.

Chris Green
Date: 2/10/2020 10:20:00 AM

Thank you so very much Jennifer

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/7/2020 9:37:00 PM

I feel this one. xomo

Chris Green
Date: 2/10/2020 10:20:00 AM

Thank you Maureen

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/7/2020 6:25:00 PM

Hello Chris … very nicely presented indeed. Great poetry - thanks Chris - Lindsay

Chris Green
Date: 2/10/2020 10:19:00 AM

Thank you so very much Lindsay

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/7/2020 4:26:00 PM

Tomorrow is our full moon Chris. It inspires poets to write about its beauty. This is lovely Chris. xxoo

Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2020 4:36:00 PM

Thank you so very much my friend. I appreciate you Connie

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/7/2020 12:44:00 PM

Lovely precious moment with nature. Enjoyed your poem Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2020 12:58:00 PM

Thank you so much Line.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/7/2020 12:30:00 PM

I can see you looking up at the moon and waiting for daybreak, Chris. It seems like a metaphor for life itself as we spend so much time waiting for events to turn in our favor. Deep and beautifully penned, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn

Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2020 12:57:00 PM

Thank you Carolyn. It sure could be because you are so right.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/7/2020 10:06:00 AM

Good morning Chris! Thanks for the sunrise:)

Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2020 10:10:00 AM

Good morning Daniel. You are welcome. : ) Thanks so much my friend.

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/7/2020 9:10:00 AM

sounds like a beautiful sight to behold... we had fog so thick you couldn't see more than a few feet ahead of you and misty skies... that are now flooding skies...thanks for sharing the beauty with us, good morning Chris....wonderful poem btw

Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2020 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Sandy. It was a beautiful sight this morning as I left for work. I am happy you liked this. Good morning my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/7/2020 8:24:00 AM

Good morning. Oh, I love this poem and know just what it is like to see the mist view in front of it! Nice writing, seeing it with the Oak tree. I hope you have more moments with the moon :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2020 8:35:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. This is exactly what I saw this morning when I stepped outside. I appreciate your kindness

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/7/2020 6:58:00 AM

Smiles! Lovely verse my friend. xomo

Chris Green
Date: 2/7/2020 7:16:00 AM

Thank you Maureen.