Moments That Matter

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Moments that matter Yield moments of clarity Revealing false pride Releases shackles of shame And more moments that matter

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Date: 1/24/2016 12:35:00 PM

clarity is everything!! Awesome.

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/27/2016 3:40:00 AM

Thank you Andrea! Certainly is.

Date: 1/23/2016 9:35:00 AM

Wonderful Tanka, Susan. the 4th line is a gem...

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/27/2016 3:37:00 AM

Why thank you! I appreciate you reading it and the awesome comment.

Date: 1/18/2016 9:30:00 PM

Superb Tanka. A revealing message that speaks deeply and with no shades of grey.. A7

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/27/2016 3:35:00 AM

Thanks so much for commenting and for compliment. Very kind. Loving the 7!

Date: 1/18/2016 10:39:00 AM

Well written. Wishing best for the contest. Anisha D

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/27/2016 3:34:00 AM

Thank you although wasn't for a contest. Glad you liked it.