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Moments In Time

There are these moments in time. When the world gets confusing... When I thought you and I were more. Slowly we faded and when nothing was left. You walked away... What happened? Isn’t it supposed to be a fairy tale ending? Weren’t you going to be mine? “Until death do we part.”? At least that’s what you said when I gave you my heart.

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Kevin Clark

Date: 3/2/2012 7:00:00 AM

You always have to give all of your heart even if it hurts.

Sarah Moncada
Date: 3/3/2012 12:13:00 PM

that is true, nothing can be more joyous or more painful than giving your heart to someone :) thank you for reading my work

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/10/2012 8:05:00 AM

I truly enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Sarah. I hope you have an amazing weekend. Love, Carol

Sarah Moncada
Date: 2/10/2012 2:26:00 PM

thank you :) and I hope that you have an amazing weekend as well. -love sarah:)

Chuck Novotny

Date: 2/9/2012 12:08:00 PM

Anquish is something I understand. And I've learned it's healing to get it out. A touching piece. Thank you for your share

Sarah Moncada
Date: 2/9/2012 2:08:00 PM

I agree 100% and no thank you for taking the time to read it