Moments

Moments I stop and stare looking up to the sky I stop and see a beautiful bird fly by I stop and watch people in the street I stop they go not a whisper or peep Moments like so short and sweet Moments I stop to capture unique Moments created from within deep Moments remembered I stop and see

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 2/25/2018 6:12:00 AM

You have beautifully describe the moments, they come and pass by before we can even realize, there are sometimes the moments when we want the time to stop for a few more moments so that we can enjoy it, especially when our beloved one is dying, we want the time to stop so that we can just see that person a littke more, but the 4th dimension is time and it can never be stop, it s what life is, it will go on and on and even finish before we realize, a really nice piece and continue to write

Niall Fulham
Date: 2/25/2018 7:03:00 PM

Hi Faraz , so true , thank you for your comment my friend , we do all spend a lot of our time in autopilot ::)))))

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 2/23/2018 12:46:00 PM

The Poet's eye at work! Sweet ink Niall :) xomo!

Niall Fulham
Date: 2/23/2018 1:09:00 PM

Hi Maureen, thank you happy weekend my friend ::))) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/23/2018 2:29:00 AM

- In our busy life ... it's good to stop sometimes - A great writing, Niall - So nice to see you post again :) - Best wishes :) - Have a lovely weekend, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 2/23/2018 6:36:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise , thank you my friend , have a lovely weekend too ::))) hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/22/2018 10:55:00 PM

A most pleasant read, Niall.

Niall Fulham
Date: 2/23/2018 1:28:00 AM

Hi Line , thank you for your comment my friend , have a lovely weekend ::)))) hugs