Moments

Come nearer now, Reach inner theme; Yield beyond how, See blooming dream; Touch a fine chord, Align fond choice, Live sure accord. Mark steadfast poise, Outline free will, Meet moments kind; Explore grand fill, Niche peace of mind; Treasure each day, Surprise greets play. Leon Enriquez 21 December 2014 Singapore

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Gary Bateman

Date: 12/21/2014 8:45:00 AM

Leon, A very nice sonnet rendered here by each verse in Iambic Dimeter. There is much power in structuring a sonnet in this fashion while focusing on your theme. Well-Done!! And a "7" from me!! Best Holiday Wishes, Gary

Leon Enriquez
Date: 12/21/2014 10:29:00 AM

Dear Gary: Thank you for your kind words. All my best wishes for a Blessed Christmas and A Happy New Year filled with love, peace and joy. Leon

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/21/2014 2:51:00 AM

Very beautiful pen Leon! Nice moments are so precious dear friend. A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 12/21/2014 10:27:00 AM

Dear Dorian: Thank you so much. Leon