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Moment Whatever

I do not know where the time goes.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 12/18/2023 10:49:00 AM

This line says so much dear Paula and we all think it especially at this time of year- Christmas seems to come quicker and quicker, doesn’t it! Congratulations in the contest. Hugs and smiles xx :):)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2023 7:55:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you like my fun write. I am asking for "More Time" for my Christmas gift... I need 2 more days added to a week. Have a blessed day writing away.........

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/17/2023 5:19:00 PM

A great first line, Paula, and so very true. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Suzette’s contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2023 7:52:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you like my fun write. More Time Please, is what I want for Christmas... I need 2 more days to a week... Have a blessed day writing away.........

Bill Baker

Date: 12/16/2023 10:06:00 PM

Nice entry, Paula, the title and poem are a great match. Good luck, my friend. Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/17/2023 12:20:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun time write. This one placed #7. Time, where does it all go??? I guess many could say they just need 2 more days to a week. They/I would be good... Hahaha!!! A Very Merry Christmas/New Years to you/your loved ones. Have a blessed day writing away.........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2023 10:11:00 AM

Hope you scored well with this one. Like mine, it's a simple but powerful first line. Congrats

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/17/2023 12:13:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my fun time write. Sometimes one line can say it all. Time, where does it all go??? I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! A Very Merry Christmas/New Years to you/your loved ones. Have a blessed day writing away.........

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/16/2023 8:28:00 AM

So succinct and well said, Paula. BIG congrats on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/17/2023 12:11:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my fun time write. I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! A Very Merry Christmas/New Years to you/your loved ones. Have a blessed day writing away.........

Valsa George

Date: 12/16/2023 5:37:00 AM

So true.... ! These days time flies so fast. Congratulations dear friend on your placement. Have a lovely weekend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/16/2023 6:56:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun time write. Yes, time flies so fast. I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.........

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/15/2023 2:52:00 PM

Congratulations, Paula, on your fabulous win. This one line conveys an array of thoughts! Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2023 5:30:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun time write. Guess I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! A Very Merry Christmas/New Years to you/your loved ones. Have a blessed day writing away.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/15/2023 9:47:00 AM

"7 Place" Moment Whatever ~ Date Written: 12/13/2023

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/15/2023 7:46:00 AM

Paula, a one liner with one mystery for all of us! A lot said in few words, Happy Friday!!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2023 10:02:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun time write. Yes, a one liner to enjoy. The question is... Where does time go??? Guess I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! A very Happy Friday To You. Have a blessed day writing away.........

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 12/15/2023 4:17:00 AM

adorable write sweetie.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2023 9:59:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you found this to be an adorable write. Guess I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.........

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/14/2023 8:33:00 PM

What a ponderous thought, Paula! Time's partner, Space, stays put but where does Time go? Reminds me of the adage: We don't know how much we don't know.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2023 9:58:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my fun time write. I wish I knew where time goes. Guess I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/14/2023 7:46:00 PM

Love the title --- and the thought... 'cos I relate totally. Where the 'H' does it go?!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2023 9:56:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you love my fun time title. I wish I knew where it goes. I will let you know if I find out. Guess I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.........

Judy Ball

Date: 12/14/2023 5:02:00 PM

Me either but it sur went fast. Good on Paula. JB

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2023 9:53:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. It sure does go faster/faster. Have a blessed day writing away.........

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/14/2023 3:24:00 PM

Hello Paula no one knows where the time goes. Hugs. /darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/16/2023 11:07:00 AM

Hello Paula, That sounds about right. Wishing you a Happy New Year. Hugs. Merry Christmas. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2023 9:51:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my fun time write. Guess I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.........

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/14/2023 12:47:00 PM

ha! i can so relate to this, paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2023 9:50:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun write & can relate to it. Have a blessed day writing away.........

Silent One

Date: 12/14/2023 10:36:00 AM

it goes so fast... we might miss it..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/14/2023 11:36:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun time write. Yes, it sure does go by way toooo fast. Guess I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.........

Karen Jones

Date: 12/14/2023 9:39:00 AM

Oh I empathize. The older we get the faster time flies!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/14/2023 11:33:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. Glad you like my fun write. As a kid, my aunt told me time gets faster when you get older. Now I believe her. Guess I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.........

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/14/2023 8:28:00 AM

Good point. It flies by so easily :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/14/2023 11:29:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. It sure does fly by fast. Guess I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.........

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/13/2023 11:22:00 PM

I find as I get older time speeds up. Good luck Paula. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/14/2023 11:27:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. Glad you like my fun write. Many years ago, my aunt told me time gets faster when you get older. I now believe her. Guess I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.........

Ink Empress

Date: 12/13/2023 9:57:00 PM

Me too i wonder sometimes, and makes me think, time just flies. What a beautiful opening line this is dear Paula. I absolutely loved this, best wishes for the contest .. pleasure always reading your work

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/14/2023 11:24:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you loved my fun write. Guess I just need 2 more days to a week & I would be good... Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/13/2023 8:48:00 PM

Moment Whatever ~ Date Written: 12/13/2023