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Moment In Time

A moment in time, frozen in my mind Vision of beauty, an angel in my eye Sunshine sparkling down Brightening up my cloudy days Life was on the downturn spiraling lost... out of control Nights of loneliness. days of false smiles A few choice words, consoling my cries Those killer smiles you gave Those deep caramelized eyes, giving solace to my broken heart Taking my hand, you lead me from the deep, into the light. Upon the next shooting star To you, I devote my heart.

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Sandra Haight

Date: 10/28/2014 10:25:00 AM

A very beautiful poem with deep emotion, Tim. I touched my heart. Sandra

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/28/2014 6:44:00 AM

Those deep caramelized eyes giving solace to my broken heart-Wow what a great line-I dig this one sweets, glad to read you as always xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/28/2014 4:04:00 AM

- What a beautiful poem, Tim !!! - Love it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/28/2014 3:12:00 AM

Well expressed torrents of emotions spilling here in this write, Tim. I wish that all your good wishes upon a star come true one day for you ;) Love & hugs! xxxx D.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/27/2014 11:00:00 PM

Love the frozen moments n the killer smiles, great passionate write Tim!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/27/2014 10:39:00 PM

"upon the next shooting star" wow, what a line my friend! You have surely enlightened me by your tenderness you exuded within this awesome poem Tim! You have expressed your love in brilliant light, I truly loved reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/27/2014 8:22:00 PM

Love this Tim, excellent.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2014 10:30:00 PM

Thank you kind sir

Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2014 10:25:00 PM

Thank you kind sir

Paul Callus

Date: 10/27/2014 5:21:00 PM

So very romantic Tim! ... and the final two lines are great. well done! // paul

Tim Smith
Date: 10/27/2014 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Paul my good friend.....Tim

Dan Helppi

Date: 10/27/2014 4:09:00 PM

I love the last lines!

Tim Smith
Date: 10/27/2014 4:12:00 PM

Thank you Dan....I like them as well. . Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 10/27/2014 4:09:00 PM

wow this is one of your best Tim love the caramelised eyes - stunning line - into faves and a 7 hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/27/2014 4:12:00 PM

Thanks Jan....This just flowed....hugs Tim

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/27/2014 3:20:00 PM

One of your great ones Tim. Very beautifully written.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/27/2014 3:28:00 PM

Thank you Brenda...You are so sweet...hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/27/2014 3:05:00 PM

I'm checking the night sky...for the next falling star.. So beautiful this is Tim..So romantic,and with a happy feel to it.You deserve all the light cause you are not a taker of love ,you re a giver,So you deserve not to be sad-Beautiful,and a favourite!Charma

Tim Smith
Date: 10/27/2014 3:13:00 PM

Thank You dear Charma....I hope the stars are out tonight...hugs Tim