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Moment In Time

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For a brief moment, she waits Patiently. Laughter stagnant ~ Paused in crippling depression, Crouching in sunken despair, Imprisoned to this moment Melancholy deeply impaled Withdrawing from isolation Contentment blooms, sorrow lifts In clusters of mere moments.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/27/2022 8:51:00 AM

the ending is just perfect for this one! I like a short meaningful poem like this one.

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/27/2022 9:03:00 AM

Thank you. I much prefer shorter poems. I'm happy with how this one turned out. I had a feeling that I wanted to express. I think I managed to capture that feeling in this poem. It's not always a great success.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/24/2022 8:47:00 AM

The Phoenix rises, heart lotus blooms ~ powerful write, Joanna, enjoyed

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/24/2022 1:20:00 PM

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

Danka Sikorska

Date: 5/13/2022 3:48:00 AM

I like how you put it together and how you ended it. This is what we all sooner or later realize.

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/13/2022 6:00:00 AM

Thank you. I'm so pleased for the possitive feedback on this poem. This one ment alot to me.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/11/2022 2:28:00 PM

Lovely pen Joanna, with nice rhyme and flow too. Nice to meet fellow Brit on PS, I'm North of the border and been on here for a few years! I enjoyed you're bio for you're a very talented lady. Have be a great week, Gordon

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/11/2022 2:35:00 PM

Thank you. Your comment is very much appreciated. I have also been on PS a couple of years. I'm south East.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 5/11/2022 7:52:00 AM

Joanna you have captured the beauty of the emerging changes that render the fulfillment of life. Well done! :)Paulette

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/11/2022 7:57:00 AM

Thank you. I am glad I was able to achieve that. :-)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 5/9/2022 10:44:00 PM

So beautifully described here Joanna . Bit by bit . In clusters of mere moments. I love contentment blooms, sorrow lifts . Intimate and vulnerable. Susan :)

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/10/2022 1:04:00 AM

Thank you. I'm pleased with how this poem turned out. Thank you for your comment. :-)

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/9/2022 5:57:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so wisdom-filled. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/9/2022 10:21:00 AM

Thank you. I'm so glad to receive such positive feedback on this poem. I had the concept in my head, I wanted to do it justice. I feel I have achieved that, so I'm very pleased with how it turned out.

Valsa George

Date: 5/7/2022 11:29:00 PM

You have brilliantly captured the moment when tearing pain gives way to the thrill of joy and contentment. So powerful....Joanna. Thanks for your kind visit to my page.

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/8/2022 1:48:00 AM

Thank you. I'm so pleased. Thank you for your comment and feedback. :-)

Jcb Brul

Date: 5/7/2022 3:57:00 PM

You captured a vivid moment that lingers! Well-done Joana.

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/8/2022 1:49:00 AM

Thank you, lingers is a very good word. I appreciate the comments and feedback. Thank you.

Laura Leiser

Date: 5/7/2022 1:02:00 PM

I could feel the emotions in your well written poem, Joanna. You truly captured the essence of emerging from depression in a powerful way..excellent! :)

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/7/2022 1:04:00 PM

Thank you, I'm so glad I succeeded, and that my poem was able to get a powerful message to the reader. The power of time and patience. Living life moment by moment. Thank you for your comment and your feedback. :-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2022 8:22:00 AM

Very descriptive and emotive winning work. Congrats on your name being on Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Sara

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/7/2022 9:11:00 AM

Thank you. I had been thinking about the concept of this poem for some time, and wondering how I could make it work. I'm happy with the way it turned out. Thank you for your comment.

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/4/2022 3:53:00 PM

Another brilliant write Joanna, the wording used draws the reader into the despair, but then you give us a glimmer of hope perhaps, (In clusters of mere moments) wonderful poetry, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/6/2022 10:56:00 AM

Crystal clear!

Joanna Feltham
Date: 5/5/2022 1:21:00 PM

Thank you. I feel that when we feel sadness, we have to trust in the process and patiently wait moment by moment. It can feel beyond our control, then in one mere moment' the darkness can lift. I hope that came across in my poem. Thank you for your comment.