Moment

Maltese bows toss and roll Within liquid diamond waves. Pulsations of foam in a crystalline field. Poseidon's herd a joyous lot these dolphins at play.

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Cynthia Jones

Date: 4/13/2015 5:29:00 PM

Mystic Rose, I'm honoured to be the first to comment on this exquisite poem. I can see the dolphins playing in the ocean. That's my favorite mammal. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Cynthia Jones
Date: 4/14/2015 11:32:00 AM

You are most welcome. I'm just happy you didn't take any offense to a simple mistake. ~HUGS~ *S* Cynthia

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/14/2015 9:18:00 AM

Thanks, I'm still pleased that you took the time to read and comment.

Cynthia Jones
Date: 4/13/2015 5:35:00 PM

M.L. I am soooo sorry. I've read and posted so many comments today, I completely forgot I was in your site, reading your poetry. It's a simple mistake my friend. *S* Cynthia