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Mombasa

Beautiful white sands welcome my feet into the ocean, with their soft, wet, coarse sensation. The ocean is warm and cool at the same time. It tempts me to stay longer without uttering a word. Its temptation, I swear it, is stronger than girls in bikinis, who want to have fun. The Mombasa people too tempt you to stay; they call you "brother", "sister," "son", "daughter".....though you are a stranger. They smile at you without any scorn, slyness, or expecting anything in return. Their smile is natural and innocent. They serve you a cup of tea without asking for it, and offer you a seat. They ask about your journey, home and destination. You feel as though you had met in a past life. "You have met God!" people tell me when I return to the city. "I found Him in Mombasa," comes my response.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/19/2016 9:48:00 PM
This tells a wonderful story ...lovely to read
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2016 2:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Angeline!! *^_^*
Date: 6/19/2016 5:34:00 PM
Well said. I was in Tanzania once but never made it to the coast and Mombasa. But I did see the ocean as we watched the sin rise from Gilman's point on Mt Kilimanjaro.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/19/2016 6:02:00 PM
I'm sure you must have really enjoyed yourself... Thanks Dave, for reading and commenting on my work!!! ;-)
Date: 6/17/2016 3:34:00 AM
I enjoyed that read. It is so gentle and yet so thought provoking. Whatever God means, I am sure she resides in Mombasa.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/17/2016 8:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Kai, for your kind comment, and enjoying my piece!! :-)
Date: 6/16/2016 1:25:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Teddy! It warmed my heart to know that such wonderful, unspoiled people still exist! I am glad you paid tribute to them in this lovely piece! Pandita
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/16/2016 5:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for enjoying this piece, Pandita!! ;-)
Date: 6/16/2016 2:49:00 AM
Teddy, coming here and reading this tremendous piece is a highlight of my time at the soup this morning.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/16/2016 7:05:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much for your kind comment, Richard!! ;-)
Date: 6/15/2016 8:08:00 PM
Great descriptive poem,nearly makes me want to pack my bags and head off, Very well written, enjoyed.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/16/2016 2:17:00 AM
Welcome to Mombasa, Paul. It's in Kenya. I'm sure if you come, you'll never want to leave, lol. Thanks for enjoying my piece!! ;-)

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