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Where were you when i needed you Through the heart aches and pain I always cried for you and you Never came to my rescue and save me I waited by the door and the window Day and night sometimes i stayed up I was waiting for us to have that girl talk It never happen and i hate that Now i am grown up i just wish that you will love me so that i will not be alone and without you physically and mentally I miss you holding me and telling me things will become better for us and we are a team with the boys they was the impact on my life they gave me strength when you did'nt I so thankful for them but even more thankful for my mom i never got to know By Shequitta Mitchell 9/23/10

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Date: 11/14/2010 9:45:00 AM
Can feel the heartache. Well done.
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:28:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shequitta. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2010 4:51:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write today ..with its very impressive theme.. touching piece..luv... hope u enjoy your time on the Soup and will check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/31/2010 1:53:00 PM
a beautiful emotion filled poem..good job!
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