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Molten Or Metallic Marvels

I really truly don't know why some things under the sun and sky attract and catch my fancy Quite queerly they happen to be hot melting smelting solids that melt into exquisite liquids. Take for instance heated liquid gold molten glass or molten brass and to watch magma 'neath the earth's fold Ooh I love just about any melting mass. With similar bizarre ecstasy and fascination do I always watch onscreen molten lava Gliding in serpentine turns, oblivious of my admiration Ah, I just love all that golden molten mass Sometimes I even have such an eccentric craving to watch just any solid beauty melting smelting that I satisfy this craving by simply imagining the honey to be some liquid fire gold in a crystal clear jar and liken it to a metallic gold syrup in the furnace burning As if it were stagnant mini-lava right before me glowing! As for other mesmeric things that I find real eye- catching are those which everybody else finds ravishing. And they are in all shine dazzling diamond dust Magical celestial stardust Glittery terrestrial gold dust in mankind's metallic materialistic lust.! But I, I am allergic to dust!:) ;)

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Date: 5/29/2015 11:30:00 AM
congrats n the win..."mankind's metallic materialistic lust...." Well said.
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Date: 5/28/2015 3:03:00 PM
S Z K. Congratulations, that is all :-) **SKAT WAS HERE** <---- copy paste.... hardy har har
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Date: 11/24/2013 6:46:00 AM
Excellent. Great imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 11/17/2013 2:10:00 PM
wowow..Just wow...PD
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Date: 11/15/2013 9:09:00 PM
your images come to life nicely...I could see the lava twisting its way along...good poem...I too am allergic to dust :)
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Date: 11/10/2013 6:41:00 PM
Thanks for your comment on my jfk, nicely done on yours above to magical and wonderful.
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Date: 11/10/2013 3:18:00 AM
This write really shines with creativity,, Ken
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Date: 11/9/2013 8:02:00 PM
Full of wonderful imagery and humor, S,zaynub, enjoyed reading it!
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Date: 11/9/2013 10:02:00 AM
THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT ON MY POEM AND YOU TOO WRITE JUST AWESOME AN POEM
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Date: 11/9/2013 9:46:00 AM
Thanks for your comment, I read your last poem it is very deep.
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