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Molay Wins Day and Dairy

We emigrated from England to Rhodesia, I was just Seven when I began grade two, My wonderful father always there if I wanted a Cuddle or a good old boo-hoo, My English still rocky as I was mostly Greek speaking, When I came home with a story of strange And mistakable reading, O daddy I uncountably sobbed, I just Don’t understand, Why at school today in my class all the Children just laughed, My teacher asked, who will tell me what We have learnt today, I put up my hand, Mrs Bell, I said proudly, we learnt About a dairy, and a mouse called Molay My father laughed, tousled my hair, My dear cheeky dolly, Your mouse is Molly and your dairy is a diary No, i said still tears streaming down, My face, it was about Molay and a dairy, Fair enough my Greek- English young lady, Let us write in your diary about Molay and the dairy. A TRUE STORY WHICH I NEVER LIVED DOWN

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Date: 7/27/2022 3:01:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, this is such a wonderful share. It is so touching and one cannot help but laugh. Takes me back to my childhood, Jennifer. I made some real clangers, they should have called me clanger. Children will be children, but in saying that, the things they do can hurt. Now, that's the sort of thing I would have done. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
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Date: 7/3/2022 2:11:00 PM
What a golden share from reminiscences of those golden days, when a poem has a personal touch like this with authentic straightway touching musings from the mementos of the precious moments, the composition becomes a masterpiece , hope this nostalgic pen will thrive tears after years here.
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Date: 6/26/2022 3:32:00 PM
This is a REALLY cute personal story. I really enjoyed this, jennifer. Thanks for visiting so many of my poems recently. I am trying to potty train an australian shepherd my husband got, and it's SO difficult, I don't have much time for anything else.
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Date: 6/19/2022 6:49:00 AM
When one thinks back on memories from their younger years, it may be a very rewarding experience. There is a wonderful tale to tell about all of my children. It would appear that you have to lead a life that has been packed with a variety of fascinating adventures. Your poem has been quite enjoyable to me.
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Date: 6/7/2022 4:08:00 PM
Dear Jenn, this is so easy to relate to for learning the English language is no walk in the park. When I was eight, my teacher asked me to read a chapter of "The Jungle Book" to my class, and I pronounced the word naked with one syllable (like baked) causing the whole class to giggle, and classmates have a long memory with that sort of mistake. But now I can laugh about it myself, as I see you are able to with your adorable dairy/diary tale... and what a tribute it is to your wonderful father who lovingly and patiently escorted you through the rocky paths of childhood! Hugs and blessings ~ John
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Date: 6/7/2022 11:28:00 PM
Thank you my friend for your every awesome comment sent my way and the well thought out and constructed answers you post back across the pond, i always enjoy and always look out for every one them. Hugs And Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 6/6/2022 10:32:00 PM
I too am driven back to my childhood days. What all interesting stories, each one of us has in our memory. Each time we rehearse those incidents in our mind, we become children once again. I enjoyed your poem, your innocence and the love of your father peering through every line.
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Date: 6/7/2022 4:00:00 AM
Hi Valsa, thank-you for this wonderful comment, you have such depth and vision, compassion and logic, - I'm so thankful we have met through this awesome poetic platform that we were both drawn to. Be blessed always my friend, Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 6/5/2022 7:07:00 AM
It is wonderful to look back on memories of childhood. I have favorites stories about each of my kids. It sounds as though you have had a very interesting life. I enjoyed your poem very much. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/7/2022 4:18:00 AM
Yes with my dad in the British army we were stationed in Cyprus, England and Rhodesia. We also lived in Zambia for five years - beautiful - close to both the Famous Victoria Falls and the much visited frequented Kariba Dam from both the Rhodesian and Zambian sides. I have lived in Greece, in fact was born there, and have visited Paris, Vienna and Scotland, But South Africa is my home. BUT would love to go to Australia. Connie, sweet lady, i hope you are well, you give me great joy when I see your comment coming in. Love and Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 6/5/2022 7:03:00 AM
Kids can be so cruel to the new students that are different from them. Thank God, they come around and can be friends once they get to know you. We often make fun of the opportunities we're given to help one another adjust to the differences we all face in life. Thanks for sharing such a touching experience of your young life with us. I'm glad you had a loving father to help you through it, Jennifer. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 6/7/2022 4:28:00 AM
MY father was my pillar Bill, when he got cancer and died at the age of 66 my whole world collapsed. Not only mine, but my 9 year old son as he was only three when i got divorced from his father, my ex husband committed suicide a few years later, and my father became my son's father. I guess it was fate that brought Elias back to me 7 years later and we got married, he became the father that was lacking in our family. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Jennifer.
Date: 6/4/2022 7:52:00 AM
True story Jennifer? Your dad sounds lovely…..great childhood poem….Enjoyed! Cheers Debx
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Date: 6/7/2022 11:04:00 PM
Hi Deb, yes it is a true story and my Dad was my hero, between us we always arrived at a result/conclusion - thanks for reading, a cute comment. Love, hugs Jennifer.
Date: 6/3/2022 6:05:00 AM
Too cute! Our misconceptions and mispronunciation- I think even the good Lord smiles. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 6/7/2022 11:13:00 PM
especially if you are in an English speaking, reading, writing class, but my reading was way above the others as I had completed grade i in England.

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