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Modern Moses

Looking down upon the deed I find The questions circling in my mind Was there some choice I overlooked? Some option hid or worse forsook? My brothers now behind me stand, and we proclaim a merry band! Yet it’s the blood-soaked ground behind That seems to fill my heavy mind. We sought to change the status quo Human nature was our foe But you fought back as best you could And never questioned if you should I know through which eyes you saw Hid behind bastions of law We tried through politics first of course Yet through trickery no recourse You knew how the game was played And for overconfidence you stayed Demanding stays and motions served Ignoring laments you claimed absurd And so we tried to explain your quirk To people indentured forced to work To pay off debts taken in desperate need Unable to know all was your deed With numbers, charts and program code To show them you had made their load But too complex it failed to stick Their worker’s minds were still too thick And worse, far worse we found You’d made your problem common ground You funneled debt into bad loans And hid your lies in people’s homes Thus making the cost of your demise The loss of a nation’s people most prized The middle class, their homes in hock The value fake, their lives in shock If you went down you had made sure Their fortunes would follow, a poison cure And so you forced a government To break it’s sacred sacrament And here we are, smoke all around And blood, sticky blood, upon the ground And although inside I hold a sob I cannot quit this awful job I lift my gun, a heavy weight To free our children from our fate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/14/2016 12:49:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Sky :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2016 9:31:00 PM
Oh yes, Sky, I like this poem. Epic, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Sky Leach
Date: 3/14/2016 7:31:00 AM
Thank you, I look forward to getting acquainted with your work and making a new friend.
Date: 3/12/2016 4:06:00 AM
Sky L.,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sky Leach
Date: 3/12/2016 4:34:00 PM
I laughed at your granny poem. :-D ty for the welcome

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