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Mocking Birds

O fair lark who first sang with Much summery mirth She casts her gaze upon Fresh pastures and dark waters O sweet lark, What see you in bright dawn light? By day the mockingbird entertains thoughts of freedom Her throat holds caricatures of joyful songs O mockingbird, Whose hymns do thy warble In the noontide fair? By the afternoon crows gather to witness a murder feast on the bones of their lovers O thy villainous creatures To whom do you confess your sins in the milky twilight? O beautiful philomel, O love, by night fall her song falls on deaf ears She cringes as the cold sets in O fair philomel, where are you in the dusty hallows of the eve? ------------------ philomel - old poetic term for nightingale, from the myth of Philomela who is raped/abused. * Female nightingales do not sing.

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Date: 5/25/2014 9:17:00 AM
thank you for the comment on my comment..PD
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Date: 5/24/2014 12:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win..hugs
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A.E. Rivenbark
Date: 5/25/2014 12:35:00 AM
Thank you :D
Date: 5/23/2014 10:25:00 AM
A E RIVERBANK,, Congratulations, . I hope you don't mind your placement in my contest. Out of past experience, I know many don't like when I don't have a first or second placement. However, this is my judgment, and it only feels right, to place each poem, in the order I would have, as if there had been a first or second placement. Believe me, I'm not taking from you or your winning poem. Hugs, and enjoy my blog, "Conundrum" if you'd like. Have yourself a sweet day. ...always Linda
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A.E. Rivenbark
Date: 5/25/2014 12:37:00 AM
Thank you for the placement and hosting! Tis an honor to be on the list. :D
Date: 5/1/2014 7:00:00 AM
Great writing. I'm glad you told what philomel meant cuz I didn't know, but your words flow so well that even unknowing of the meaning I could feel the waves the words make.
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Date: 5/1/2014 1:16:00 AM
Enjoyed this lovely analogical write, A.E
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