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Mobious Syndrome

Such an overwhelming,heartwrenching disease from a baby,a parents pain,sheilded yet knotted inside non facial expressions,no tears,no laughter how do you detect the mood of your infant. Discovered from a cist on the brain a young mum, to finalize her vital exams grandma`s love, family and friends too help make this possible. A non existant forward, it may seem weeks of contiuous tests,hearts full of hope proven that it can be overstepped grown teenager speaks of his ordeal Today is the day,that consultant is seen,apprehensive,nrevous tears of joy,negative test, a normal life,others not so lucky Paul Beadnall for Brian Strand`s ( free verse contest) 19/7/2011

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Date: 7/19/2011 7:24:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Paul. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 3:41:00 PM
Great poem, emotional, touching. Thanks for your gracious kind words on my poem Help me Understand......You are a kind Gent, can't express how much I appreciate the encouragement and you thoughfulness......thanks friend......Old Jack
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