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Turtle walks slowly on ground Shell is home and protection A land and water dweller Owns first mobile home By: Richard Lamoureux For Russell Sivy's contest: Natural Dodoitsu First attempt at this style, hope I got it right

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/5/2014 8:41:00 PM
haha great! if you haven't written one for the free verse turtle contest going right now, you should enter this one, it is super creative! I love your mind babe!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/6/2014 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Casarah, I will check it out.
Date: 8/4/2013 5:57:00 PM
very cute ,,,, and it's a winner. glad you like my The Great Swan ;}
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2013 7:10:00 PM
Thanks Debbie!
Date: 2/7/2013 2:12:00 PM
A nice winning poem~LUV*SKAT
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2013 2:31:00 PM
Thanks Skat
Date: 1/12/2013 9:33:00 PM
Congrats to the funniest one on the winners list!! I sure enjoyed this one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 1:30:00 AM
This one came crawling to me and bit me on the funny bone.
Date: 1/11/2013 10:03:00 PM
RICHARD, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 1:30:00 AM
Thanks Linda
Date: 1/11/2013 12:22:00 AM
This made me smile..clever! congrats to you. BG
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/11/2013 5:05:00 AM
Thanks Barbara.
Date: 1/10/2013 9:01:00 PM
I love animals :) cute!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/10/2013 11:40:00 PM
Me too, thanks for commenting
Date: 1/9/2013 10:39:00 PM
Well done broughta smile to my face ...Seren
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/9/2013 11:28:00 PM
Thanks Seren
Date: 1/9/2013 9:36:00 PM
Oh how clever and true. congratulations Richard. Love, Joyce
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/9/2013 11:28:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 1/9/2013 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win, Richard! Always, Annalise
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/9/2013 11:29:00 PM
Thanks, this was a fun one.
Date: 1/9/2013 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations ...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/9/2013 11:30:00 PM
Thanks Mehnaz
Date: 1/9/2013 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Richard , this is so good xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/9/2013 11:30:00 PM
Thanks Mandy
Date: 11/15/2012 6:16:00 AM
haha...So true.A cute poem.Enjoyed the read.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/15/2012 6:30:00 AM
Thanks Kash, I like the new photo, nice seeing you without the glasses
Date: 11/14/2012 2:53:00 PM
Lol, ahh too funny, Richard. Yes. Never thought of that. True mobil :))
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/14/2012 3:36:00 PM
Glad you liked it, thanks!

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