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Among the crafty things I own A mobile's one I love, Suspended from the ceiling, Gently twirling from above. A moon and stag are up above, Three pine trees hang below, With stars, a heart, plus creatures Of a type I do not know. Their movement's imperceptible At times, but with a breeze, They rotate in a manner which Has never failed to please. For mobiles shouldn't be confined To galleries or cribs. When this one caught my eye, I knew That I would have first dibs. And every time I catch it shift I smile at its design, Delighted that I made my move To make that mobile mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/26/2014 7:37:00 PM
A poem about a mobile. As usual, written with your unique style. A simple explanation about joy and your elation. :)
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Date: 8/24/2014 3:05:00 PM
I love this lovely 'friendly' write which flows with ease; very unique topic! /// Also, Ilene, thank you for the visit and comments re my collab. write with Carolyn, "Halloween: Mask of Comfort"; could not reply cos of technical hitch. Regards, ..... paul
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