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A Mixed Memory When mother made gateau for someone’s birthdays I beat the cream using a steel whisker. Boring work before the cream thickened and could be spread on the cake, but it was worth it, as I got to lick bowl. I thought of this as a tempest whipped the sea into a froth. In the galley I had a mix-master and could whisk up cream in no time, only I didn’t have the real stuff , had to use condensed milk but I didn’t feel inclined to lick its residue. The tempest blew into storm, the ship was jumping about like an untrained colt refusing to have a rider on its back. Life boats smashed, ship railings too we only hoped she could ride out the storm. In Hamburg I walked ashore and ate a piece of Black Forest Gateau, awe-inspiring. And to sit in a coffee shop that didn’t throw me off my chair like demented colt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/20/2012 2:09:00 AM
Dear Jan, as usual, very inventive. Another favorite. As my grandson says, you "rock" (and roll) love, Kathy
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/20/2012 4:27:00 AM
thank you Kathryn
Date: 3/9/2012 5:45:00 PM
i love the way you wove the memory of helping your mother bake with being on a stormy sea (with its froth). the mixture worked very well and created a delicious poem!
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/10/2012 4:14:00 AM
thank you Ilene
Date: 3/9/2012 1:35:00 PM
Hey jan oskar, nice poem...it makes me want some gateau...have a good day..Marty
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/9/2012 2:36:00 PM
thank you Marty

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